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Date:      Fri, 22 Dec 2017 22:24:30 -0600
From:      Benjamin Kaduk <kaduk@mit.edu>
To:        Eitan Adler <eadler@FreeBSD.org>
Cc:        doc-committers@FreeBSD.org, svn-doc-all@FreeBSD.org, svn-doc-head@FreeBSD.org
Subject:   Re: svn commit: r51330 - in head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs: ipv6 multimedia portmgr
Message-ID:  <20171223042430.GV39477@kduck.kaduk.org>
In-Reply-To: <201712221748.vBMHmiUt059300@repo.freebsd.org>
References:  <201712221748.vBMHmiUt059300@repo.freebsd.org>

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On Fri, Dec 22, 2017 at 05:48:44PM +0000, Eitan Adler wrote:
> Author: eadler
> Date: Fri Dec 22 17:48:44 2017
> New Revision: 51330
> URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/51330
> 
> Log:
>   multiple: fix a few typos
>   
>   - Duplicate words
>   - change -> chance
>   - insure -> ensure (this is actually an Americanism, but can confuse
>     some people)
> 
> Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/multimedia/multimedia-input.xml
> ==============================================================================
> --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/multimedia/multimedia-input.xml	Fri Dec 22 14:48:00 2017	(r51329)
> +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/multimedia/multimedia-input.xml	Fri Dec 22 17:48:44 2017	(r51330)
> @@ -13072,7 +13072,7 @@
>  		on the system. One of the first problems presented
>  		to the person who wants to tune the scheduler is
>  		how to measure the effects of their changes. Simply
> -		tweaking the parameters and hoping that that will
> +		tweaking the parameters and hoping that will

This "that that" was correct.  I am travelling; can you fix it?

-Ben

>  		help is not going to lead to good results. In our
>  		recent experiments we have used the top(1) program
>  		to measure our results.
> 



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