Date: Wed, 21 Sep 2005 17:27:38 +0200 From: Pav Lucistnik <pav@FreeBSD.org> To: Joe Marcus Clarke <marcus@FreeBSD.org> Cc: cvs-ports@FreeBSD.org, ports-committers@FreeBSD.org, cvs-all@FreeBSD.org, portmgr@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: Deprecating the signature at the end of pkg-descr Message-ID: <1127316458.58280.63.camel@pav.hide.vol.cz> In-Reply-To: <43317B5F.7010500@FreeBSD.org> References: <200509201420.j8KEKYa6066950@repoman.freebsd.org> <433100DE.2040901@FreeBSD.org> <43310DF2.8010100@FreeBSD.org> <43310F88.3040702@FreeBSD.org> <43311976.4070608@FreeBSD.org> <20050921092858.GA19214@zi025.glhnet.mhn.de> <20050921142845.GB32718@soaustin.net> <1127313739.58280.59.camel@pav.hide.vol.cz> <43317B5F.7010500@FreeBSD.org>
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Joe Marcus Clarke píše v st 21. 09. 2005 v 11:25 -0400:
> Pav Lucistnik wrote:
>
> |
> | Index: book.sgml
> | ===================================================================
> | RCS file:
> /home/dcvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/book.sgml,v
> | retrieving revision 1.616
> | diff -a -u -r1.616 book.sgml
> | --- book.sgml 20 Sep 2005 22:23:31 -0000 1.616
> | +++ book.sgml 21 Sep 2005 14:41:59 -0000
> | @@ -165,18 +165,15 @@
> | correctly.</para>
> | </note>
> |
> | - <para>It is recommended that you sign your name at the end of this
> | - file, as in:</para>
> | + <para>The following example shows how your
> | + <filename>pkg-descr</filename> should look like:</para>
>
> how ... look like is improper and/or awkward English. Either use "what
> ... look like" or drop the "like."
I dropped the "like". Thank you.
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Pav Lucistnik <pav@oook.cz>
<pav@FreeBSD.org>
If God is perfect, why did He create discontinuous functions?
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