Date: Mon, 06 Jan 2003 07:39:59 +0900 (JST) From: Hiroki Sato <hrs@eos.ocn.ne.jp> To: doc@FreeBSD.ORG Subject: a relnotes/common/new.sgml patch Message-ID: <20030106.073959.104035916.hrs@eos.ocn.ne.jp>
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Hi,
I found some unsuitable sentences during translation
of relnotes/common/new.sgml, and made a patch for that.
Could anyone review this?
1) What does "tx(4) supports true multicast filtering" mean?
I guess tx(4) had partial support of multicast filtering,
and now it has full support of it. If it is correct,
the word "true" is opaque.
2) For consistency, ia64's MCA records should be written as
"machine check architecture records," not "machine check records."
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| Hiroki SATO <hrs@eos.ocn.ne.jp>
Index: new.sgml
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RCS file: /home/ncvs/src/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/common/new.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.468
diff -d -u -I\$FreeBSD:.*\$ -I\$Id:.*\$ -I\$hrs:.*\$ -r1.468 new.sgml
--- new.sgml 30 Dec 2002 21:18:04 -0000 1.468
+++ new.sgml 5 Jan 2003 21:53:32 -0000
@@ -888,7 +888,7 @@
<para role="historic">The &man.ti.4; driver correctly masks VLAN tags. &merged;</para>
- <para>The &man.tx.4; driver now supports true multicast
+ <para>The &man.tx.4; driver now has full support of multicast
filtering.</para>
<para role="historic">The &man.txp.4; driver has been added to support NICs
@@ -3025,7 +3025,7 @@
manpages) or if the running user is
<username>root</username>.</para>
- <para arch="ia64">The mca utility, for decoding machine check
+ <para arch="ia64">The mca utility, for decoding Machine Check Architecture
records, has been added.</para>
<para>The &man.mdmfs.8; command has been added; it is a wrapper
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