Date: Tue, 7 Nov 2006 14:32:44 -0500 From: Tom Rhodes <trhodes@FreeBSD.org> To: Ceri Davies <ceri@submonkey.net> Cc: danger@FreeBSD.org, doc-committers@FreeBSD.org, cvs-doc@FreeBSD.org, cvs-all@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: cvs commit: www/en about.sgml Message-ID: <20061107143244.3cea8fc0.trhodes@FreeBSD.org> In-Reply-To: <20061107185552.GD83597@submonkey.net> References: <200611071654.kA7GsWbj097708@repoman.freebsd.org> <20061107185552.GD83597@submonkey.net>
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On Tue, 7 Nov 2006 18:55:52 +0000 Ceri Davies <ceri@submonkey.net> wrote: > On Tue, Nov 07, 2006 at 04:54:31PM +0000, Daniel Gerzo wrote: > > danger 2006-11-07 16:54:31 UTC > > > > FreeBSD doc repository > > > > Modified files: > > en about.sgml > > Log: > > - improve grammar > > > > | @@ -54,7 +54,7 @@ > > | including CD-ROM, DVD-ROM, floppy disk, magnetic tape, > > | an MS-DOS® partition, or if you have a network > > | connection, you can install it <i>directly</i> over > > | - anonymous FTP or NFS. All you need is > > | + anonymous FTP or NFS. All you need are > > | <a > > | href="&base;/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install.html">these > > | directions</a>.</p> > > This change isn't correct - "these directions" is the object of this > sentence and the verb "is" should agree with the subject "all you need", > which is singular. > > See sections 5.23 and 5.24 of the CMS. You're right, I didn't think well enough here. -- Tom Rhodes
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