Date: Fri, 22 Dec 2017 20:43:22 -0800 From: Eitan Adler <eadler@freebsd.org> To: Benjamin Kaduk <kaduk@mit.edu> Cc: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: Re: svn commit: r51330 - in head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs: ipv6 multimedia portmgr Message-ID: <CAF6rxg=ZB6ALMv%2BdRuFkX01sdf4hOx96Ys1ADshpBiQJiLinyQ@mail.gmail.com> In-Reply-To: <20171223042430.GV39477@kduck.kaduk.org> References: <201712221748.vBMHmiUt059300@repo.freebsd.org> <20171223042430.GV39477@kduck.kaduk.org>
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On 22 December 2017 at 20:24, Benjamin Kaduk <kaduk@mit.edu> wrote: > On Fri, Dec 22, 2017 at 05:48:44PM +0000, Eitan Adler wrote: >> Author: eadler >> Date: Fri Dec 22 17:48:44 2017 >> New Revision: 51330 >> URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/51330 >> >> Log: >> multiple: fix a few typos >> >> - Duplicate words >> - change -> chance >> - insure -> ensure (this is actually an Americanism, but can confuse >> some people) >> >> Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/multimedia/multimedia-input.xml >> ============================================================================== >> --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/multimedia/multimedia-input.xml Fri Dec 22 14:48:00 2017 (r51329) >> +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/multimedia/multimedia-input.xml Fri Dec 22 17:48:44 2017 (r51330) >> @@ -13072,7 +13072,7 @@ >> on the system. One of the first problems presented >> to the person who wants to tune the scheduler is >> how to measure the effects of their changes. Simply >> - tweaking the parameters and hoping that that will >> + tweaking the parameters and hoping that will > > This "that that" was correct. I am travelling; can you fix it? I read this a few times. Switched to - tweaking the parameters and hoping that will + tweaking the parameters and hoping that the tweaks will A fun sentence for you: Tim where Jim had had "had had" had had "had"; "had had" had had a better effect on the teacher. -- Eitan Adler Source, Ports, Doc committer Bugmeister, Ports Security teams
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