Date: Mon, 20 May 2002 19:06:10 +0200 (CEST) From: Marc Fonvieille <marc@blackend.org> To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org Subject: docs/38349: Various problems in section 2.9.14 of the Handbook Message-ID: <200205201706.g4KH6AAK013082@abigail.blackend.org>
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>Number: 38349
>Category: docs
>Synopsis: Various problems in section 2.9.14 of the Handbook
>Confidential: no
>Severity: non-critical
>Priority: low
>Responsible: freebsd-doc
>State: open
>Quarter:
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>Date-Required:
>Class: doc-bug
>Submitter-Id: current-users
>Arrival-Date: Mon May 20 10:20:02 PDT 2002
>Closed-Date:
>Last-Modified:
>Originator: Marc Fonvieille
>Release: FreeBSD 4.6-PRERELEASE i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD abigail.blackend.org 4.6-PRERELEASE FreeBSD 4.6-PRERELEASE #5: Sun May 12 00:30:43 CEST 2002 marc@abigail.blackend.org:/usr/src/sys/compile/ABIGAIL i386
>Description:
I just noted a problem in section 2.9.14 of the Handbook: the entry "Add
User" does not exist in Sysinstall, if you look at Figure 2-57 you see
"User".
In this patch i also corrected missing periods and a parentheses problem.
Read the patch below for more details.
It's finished for this section, let's look at the next ones :)
>How-To-Repeat:
>Fix:
Apply the patch to handbook/install/chapter.sgml
--- chapter.sgml.diff begins here ---
--- chapter.sgml.org Mon May 20 11:13:45 2002
+++ chapter.sgml Mon May 20 13:53:58 2002
@@ -4113,7 +4113,7 @@
<keycap>Enter</keycap> to continue with adding a user.</para>
<figure id="add-user2">
- <title>Select Add User</title>
+ <title>Select User</title>
<mediaobject>
<imageobject>
@@ -4122,7 +4122,7 @@
</mediaobject>
</figure>
- <para>Select <guimenuitem>Add User</guimenuitem> with the arrow keys
+ <para>Select <guimenuitem>User</guimenuitem> with the arrow keys
and press <keycap>Enter</keycap>.</para>
<figure id="add-user3">
@@ -4144,7 +4144,7 @@
<term>Login ID</term>
<listitem>
- <para>The login name of the new user (mandatory)</para>
+ <para>The login name of the new user (mandatory).</para>
</listitem>
</varlistentry>
@@ -4153,7 +4153,7 @@
<listitem>
<para>The numerical ID for this user (leave blank for
- automatic choice)</para>
+ automatic choice).</para>
</listitem>
</varlistentry>
@@ -4162,7 +4162,7 @@
<listitem>
<para>The login group name for this user (leave blank for
- automatic choice)</para>
+ automatic choice).</para>
</listitem>
</varlistentry>
@@ -4171,7 +4171,7 @@
<listitem>
<para>The password for this user (enter this field with
- care!)</para>
+ care!).</para>
</listitem>
</varlistentry>
@@ -4179,7 +4179,7 @@
<term>Full name</term>
<listitem>
- <para>The user's full name (comment)</para>
+ <para>The user's full name (comment).</para>
</listitem>
</varlistentry>
@@ -4188,7 +4188,7 @@
<listitem>
<para>The groups this user belongs to (i.e. gets access
- rights for)</para>
+ rights for).</para>
</listitem>
</varlistentry>
@@ -4197,7 +4197,7 @@
<listitem>
<para>The user's home directory (leave blank for
- default)</para>
+ default).</para>
</listitem>
</varlistentry>
@@ -4205,7 +4205,7 @@
<term>Login shell</term>
<listitem>
<para>The user's login shell (leave blank for
- default). (<filename>/bin/sh</filename>)</para>
+ default, i.e. <filename>/bin/sh</filename>).</para>
</listitem>
</varlistentry>
</variablelist>
--- chapter.sgml.diff ends here ---
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