Date: Mon, 20 May 2002 19:06:10 +0200 (CEST) From: Marc Fonvieille <marc@blackend.org> To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org Subject: docs/38349: Various problems in section 2.9.14 of the Handbook Message-ID: <200205201706.g4KH6AAK013082@abigail.blackend.org>
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>Number: 38349 >Category: docs >Synopsis: Various problems in section 2.9.14 of the Handbook >Confidential: no >Severity: non-critical >Priority: low >Responsible: freebsd-doc >State: open >Quarter: >Keywords: >Date-Required: >Class: doc-bug >Submitter-Id: current-users >Arrival-Date: Mon May 20 10:20:02 PDT 2002 >Closed-Date: >Last-Modified: >Originator: Marc Fonvieille >Release: FreeBSD 4.6-PRERELEASE i386 >Organization: >Environment: System: FreeBSD abigail.blackend.org 4.6-PRERELEASE FreeBSD 4.6-PRERELEASE #5: Sun May 12 00:30:43 CEST 2002 marc@abigail.blackend.org:/usr/src/sys/compile/ABIGAIL i386 >Description: I just noted a problem in section 2.9.14 of the Handbook: the entry "Add User" does not exist in Sysinstall, if you look at Figure 2-57 you see "User". In this patch i also corrected missing periods and a parentheses problem. Read the patch below for more details. It's finished for this section, let's look at the next ones :) >How-To-Repeat: >Fix: Apply the patch to handbook/install/chapter.sgml --- chapter.sgml.diff begins here --- --- chapter.sgml.org Mon May 20 11:13:45 2002 +++ chapter.sgml Mon May 20 13:53:58 2002 @@ -4113,7 +4113,7 @@ <keycap>Enter</keycap> to continue with adding a user.</para> <figure id="add-user2"> - <title>Select Add User</title> + <title>Select User</title> <mediaobject> <imageobject> @@ -4122,7 +4122,7 @@ </mediaobject> </figure> - <para>Select <guimenuitem>Add User</guimenuitem> with the arrow keys + <para>Select <guimenuitem>User</guimenuitem> with the arrow keys and press <keycap>Enter</keycap>.</para> <figure id="add-user3"> @@ -4144,7 +4144,7 @@ <term>Login ID</term> <listitem> - <para>The login name of the new user (mandatory)</para> + <para>The login name of the new user (mandatory).</para> </listitem> </varlistentry> @@ -4153,7 +4153,7 @@ <listitem> <para>The numerical ID for this user (leave blank for - automatic choice)</para> + automatic choice).</para> </listitem> </varlistentry> @@ -4162,7 +4162,7 @@ <listitem> <para>The login group name for this user (leave blank for - automatic choice)</para> + automatic choice).</para> </listitem> </varlistentry> @@ -4171,7 +4171,7 @@ <listitem> <para>The password for this user (enter this field with - care!)</para> + care!).</para> </listitem> </varlistentry> @@ -4179,7 +4179,7 @@ <term>Full name</term> <listitem> - <para>The user's full name (comment)</para> + <para>The user's full name (comment).</para> </listitem> </varlistentry> @@ -4188,7 +4188,7 @@ <listitem> <para>The groups this user belongs to (i.e. gets access - rights for)</para> + rights for).</para> </listitem> </varlistentry> @@ -4197,7 +4197,7 @@ <listitem> <para>The user's home directory (leave blank for - default)</para> + default).</para> </listitem> </varlistentry> @@ -4205,7 +4205,7 @@ <term>Login shell</term> <listitem> <para>The user's login shell (leave blank for - default). (<filename>/bin/sh</filename>)</para> + default, i.e. <filename>/bin/sh</filename>).</para> </listitem> </varlistentry> </variablelist> --- chapter.sgml.diff ends here --- >Release-Note: >Audit-Trail: >Unformatted: To Unsubscribe: send mail to majordomo@FreeBSD.org with "unsubscribe freebsd-doc" in the body of the message
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