Date: Fri, 7 Oct 2016 18:00:23 +0000 (UTC) From: Sevan Janiyan <sevan@FreeBSD.org> To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r49465 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers Message-ID: <201610071800.u97I0NBR043700@repo.freebsd.org>
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Author: sevan Date: Fri Oct 7 18:00:23 2016 New Revision: 49465 URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/49465 Log: Fix dead link to Apple's whitepaper on their AutoFS implementation using Archive.org mirror. Reword sentence leading up to link with a friendlier toned version. Replace contractions & spelling mistake raised by Igor. PR: 213022 Reported by: Ranjit Marathay <rmarathay at gmail dot com> Approved by: bcr (mentor) wblock Differential Revision: https://reviews.freebsd.org/D8156 Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.xml Fri Oct 7 16:21:35 2016 (r49464) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.xml Fri Oct 7 18:00:23 2016 (r49465) @@ -999,9 +999,9 @@ Exports list on foobar: &prompt.root; <userinput>service autounmountd start</userinput></screen> <para>The &man.autofs.5; map format is the same as in other - operating systems, it might be desirable to consult - information from other operating systems, such as the <link - xlink:href="http://images.apple.com/business/docs/Autofs.pdf">Mac + operating systems. Information about this format from other + sources can be useful, like the <link + xlink:href="http://web.archive.org/web/20160813071113/http://images.apple.com/business/docs/Autofs.pdf">Mac OS X document</link>.</para> <para>Consult the &man.automount.8;, &man.automountd.8;, @@ -3369,7 +3369,7 @@ options { disable-empty-zone "0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.IP6.ARPA"; disable-empty-zone "1.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.IP6.ARPA"; -// If you've got a DNS server around at your upstream provider, enter +// If you have a DNS server around at your upstream provider, enter // its IP address here, and enable the line below. This will make you // benefit from its cache, thus reduce overall DNS traffic in the Internet. /* @@ -3425,7 +3425,7 @@ options { // query-source address * port NNNNN; }; -// If you enable a local name server, don't forget to enter 127.0.0.1 +// If you enable a local name server, do not forget to enter 127.0.0.1 // first in your /etc/resolv.conf so this server will be queried. // Also, make sure to enable it in /etc/rc.conf. @@ -3621,7 +3621,7 @@ zone "ip6.int" { type master; file "/et // understand how DNS and BIND work. There are sometimes // non-obvious pitfalls. Setting up a slave zone is usually simpler. // -// NB: Don't blindly enable the examples below. :-) Use actual names +// NB: Do not blindly enable the examples below. :-) Use actual names // and addresses instead. /* An example dynamic zone @@ -4763,7 +4763,7 @@ $include Kexample.com.+005+nnnnn.ZSK.key <programlisting>LoadModule php5_module libexec/apache24/libphp5.so</programlisting> <!-- -I don't think this is still needed +I do not think this is still needed AddModule mod_php5.c <IfModule mod_php5.c> DirectoryIndex index.php index.html @@ -5015,7 +5015,7 @@ AddModule mod_php5.c a forum for the trade of unlicensed commercial software or worse. If anonymous <acronym>FTP</acronym> uploads are required, then verify the permissions so that these files - can not be read by other anonymous users until they have + cannot be read by other anonymous users until they have been reviewed by an administrator.</para> </note> </sect2>
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