Date: Mon, 17 Dec 2012 20:41:56 -0500 From: Eitan Adler <eadler@freebsd.org> To: Benjamin Kaduk <kaduk@mit.edu> Cc: svn-doc-head@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, doc-committers@freebsd.org Subject: Re: svn commit: r40403 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq Message-ID: <CAF6rxgkd-UGJUDz9=RZE_jWfZXi6=1uio_otGzM%2BZz=wyRfo_A@mail.gmail.com> In-Reply-To: <alpine.GSO.1.10.1212171248350.2164@multics.mit.edu> References: <201212171601.qBHG1rC1019088@svn.freebsd.org> <alpine.GSO.1.10.1212171248350.2164@multics.mit.edu>
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On 17 December 2012 12:50, Benjamin Kaduk <kaduk@mit.edu> wrote: > On Mon, 17 Dec 2012, Eitan Adler wrote: > >> Author: eadler >> Date: Mon Dec 17 16:01:53 2012 >> New Revision: 40403 >> URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/40403 >> >> Log: >> Modernize ppp-drop-heavy-load to conform with current defaults. >> >> Submitted by: Daniel O'Connor >> Approved by: bcr (mentor) >> >> Modified: >> head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml >> >> Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml >> >> ============================================================================== >> --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml Mon Dec 17 16:01:51 2012 >> (r40402) >> +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml Mon Dec 17 16:01:53 2012 >> (r40403) >> @@ -7245,13 +7245,12 @@ add 0 0 HISADDR</programlisting> >> <answer> >> <para>If you have Link Quality Reporting (LQR) configured, it >> is possible that too many LQR packets are lost between your >> - machine and the peer. The &man.ppp.8; program deduces that >> - the line must therefore be bad, and disconnects. Prior to >> - &os; version 2.2.5, LQR was enabled by default. It is now >> - disabled by default. LQR can be disabled with the following >> - line:</para> >> + machine and the peer. &man.ppp.8; deduces that > > > Hmm, starting a sentence with an entity, somewhat questionable. > > Why not "Such packet loss causes &man.ppp.8; to deduce that"? No objection to this. -- Eitan Adler Source, Ports, Doc committer Bugmeister, Ports Security teams
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