Date: Wed, 27 Feb 2013 21:23:58 +0000 (UTC) From: Eitan Adler <eadler@FreeBSD.org> To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r41054 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge Message-ID: <201302272123.r1RLNwuA010231@svn.freebsd.org>
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Author: eadler Date: Wed Feb 27 21:23:57 2013 New Revision: 41054 URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/41054 Log: Fix a bunch of grammos and typos PR: docs/176451 Submitted by: Tom <trh411@gmail.com> Approved by: bcr (mentor) Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.xml Wed Feb 27 21:23:54 2013 (r41053) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.xml Wed Feb 27 21:23:57 2013 (r41054) @@ -1813,8 +1813,8 @@ Fetching 133 new ports or files... done. up-to-date, refer to <xref linkend="synching"/> for detailed help about synchronizing to a newer version.</para> - <para>Updating the system from source is a more subtle than - it might initially seem to be, and the &os; developers have + <para>Updating the system from source is a more subtle process + than it might initially seem to be, and the &os; developers have found it necessary over the years to change the recommended approach fairly dramatically as new kinds of unavoidable dependencies come to light. The rest of this section @@ -1858,7 +1858,7 @@ Fetching 133 new ports or files... done. </listitem> <listitem> - <para>Some configuration changes must be done before the new + <para>Some configuration changes must be made before the new world is installed, but others might break the old world. Hence, two different configuration upgrade steps are generally needed.</para> @@ -1946,7 +1946,7 @@ Fetching 133 new ports or files... done. <para><command>mergemaster</command></para> <para>Repeated to update the remaining configuration files, - not that the new world is on disk.</para> + now that the new world is on disk.</para> </listitem> <listitem> @@ -2217,7 +2217,7 @@ Script done, …</screen> <para><emphasis>Do not</emphasis> save the output in <filename class="directory">/tmp</filename> as this directory may be cleared at next reboot. A better place to save the file is - <filename class="directory">/var/tmp</filename>or in + <filename class="directory">/var/tmp</filename> or in <username>root</username>'s home directory.</para> </sect3> @@ -2234,8 +2234,7 @@ Script done, …</screen> <para>To rebuild the world, use &man.make.1;. This command reads instructions from the <filename>Makefile</filename>, which describes how the programs that comprise &os; should - be rebuilt and the order in which they should be - built.</para> + be built and the order in which they should be built.</para> <para>The general format of the command is as follows:</para> @@ -2542,7 +2541,7 @@ Script done, …</screen> <sect3> <title>Manual Update</title> - <para>To instead perform the update manually, do not just copy + <para>To perform the update manually instead, do not just copy over the files from <filename class="directory">/usr/src/etc</filename> to <filename class="directory">/etc</filename> and expect it to @@ -2580,7 +2579,7 @@ Script done, …</screen> <para>Next, build a dummy set of directories to install the new <filename class="directory">/etc</filename> and other - files into. <filename + files into <filename class="directory">/var/tmp/root</filename> is a reasonable choice:</para> @@ -2898,7 +2897,7 @@ Building everything.. <listitem> <para>Turn off profiling by setting <quote>NO_PROFILE=true</quote> in - <filename>/etc/make.conf</filename>).</para> + <filename>/etc/make.conf</filename>.</para> </listitem> <listitem>
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