Skip site navigation (1)Skip section navigation (2)
Date:      Wed, 27 Jan 2016 18:26:02 +0000 (UTC)
From:      Tom Rhodes <trhodes@FreeBSD.org>
To:        doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org
Subject:   svn commit: r48104 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security
Message-ID:  <201601271826.u0RIQ2eV047251@repo.freebsd.org>

next in thread | raw e-mail | index | archive | help
Author: trhodes
Date: Wed Jan 27 18:26:02 2016
New Revision: 48104
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/48104

Log:
  Change a ",." to a "." to properly end a sentence.

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.xml	Wed Jan 27 18:23:30 2016	(r48103)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.xml	Wed Jan 27 18:26:02 2016	(r48104)
@@ -28,7 +28,7 @@
     <title>Synopsis</title>
 
     <para>Security, whether physical or virtual, is a topic so broad
-      that an entire industry has grown up around it.  Hundreds of
+      that an entire industry has evolved around it.  Hundreds of
       standard practices have been authored about how to secure
       systems and networks, and as a user of &os;, understanding how
       to protect against attacks and intruders is a must.</para>
@@ -2963,7 +2963,7 @@ user@unfirewalled-system.example.org's p
 	  extra <literal>d</literal> in the first filename).  The
 	  first file configures the server and the second file
 	  configures the client.  Refer to &man.ssh.config.5; for a
-	  listing of the available client settings,.</para>
+	  listing of the available client settings.</para>
       </tip>
     </sect2>
   </sect1>



Want to link to this message? Use this URL: <https://mail-archive.FreeBSD.org/cgi/mid.cgi?201601271826.u0RIQ2eV047251>