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Date:      Sun, 14 Apr 2019 12:10:24 +0000 (UTC)
From:      "Andrey V. Elsukov" <ae@FreeBSD.org>
To:        src-committers@freebsd.org, svn-src-all@freebsd.org, svn-src-stable@freebsd.org, svn-src-stable-11@freebsd.org
Subject:   svn commit: r346206 - stable/11/sbin/ipfw
Message-ID:  <201904141210.x3ECAOg6037319@repo.freebsd.org>

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Author: ae
Date: Sun Apr 14 12:10:23 2019
New Revision: 346206
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/base/346206

Log:
  MFC r344665 (by trhodes):
    Grammar tweaks in ipfw manual page.

Modified:
  stable/11/sbin/ipfw/ipfw.8
Directory Properties:
  stable/11/   (props changed)

Modified: stable/11/sbin/ipfw/ipfw.8
==============================================================================
--- stable/11/sbin/ipfw/ipfw.8	Sun Apr 14 12:05:08 2019	(r346205)
+++ stable/11/sbin/ipfw/ipfw.8	Sun Apr 14 12:10:23 2019	(r346206)
@@ -233,7 +233,7 @@ or
 .Cm limit
 rule, and are typically used to open the firewall on-demand to
 legitimate traffic only.
-Please, note, that
+Please note, that
 .Cm keep-state
 amd
 .Cm limit
@@ -684,8 +684,8 @@ is set to 0 (default), one can use
 attached to the
 .Li ipfw0
 pseudo interface.
-This pseudo interface can be created after a boot
-manually by using the following command:
+This pseudo interface can be created manually after a system
+boot by using the following command:
 .Bd -literal -offset indent
 # ifconfig ipfw0 create
 .Ed
@@ -698,7 +698,7 @@ file:
 firewall_logif="YES"
 .Ed
 .Pp
-There is no overhead if no
+There is zero overhead when no
 .Xr bpf 4
 is attached to the pseudo interface.
 .Pp



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