Date: Tue, 13 Nov 2012 21:20:35 +0100 From: Marc Fonvieille <blackend@freebsd.org> To: Benjamin Kaduk <kaduk@MIT.EDU> Cc: svn-doc-head@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, doc-committers@freebsd.org Subject: Re: svn commit: r39981 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq Message-ID: <20121113202035.GB1460@emphyrio.blackend.org> In-Reply-To: <alpine.GSO.1.10.1211121456040.2164@multics.mit.edu> References: <201211112229.qABMT1il009287@svn.freebsd.org> <alpine.GSO.1.10.1211121456040.2164@multics.mit.edu>
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On Mon, Nov 12, 2012 at 02:58:44PM -0500, Benjamin Kaduk wrote: > On Sun, 11 Nov 2012, Eitan Adler wrote: > > > Author: eadler > > Date: Sun Nov 11 22:29:01 2012 > > New Revision: 39981 > > URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/39981 > > > > Log: > > Reduce redundant markup and word and other minor problems reported by > > igor. Limited additional checking was done of the surrounding content. > > > > Approved by: jkois (mentor, before merge conflict resolution) > > > > Modified: > > head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml > > > > Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml > > ============================================================================== > > --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml Sun Nov 11 21:42:32 2012 (r39980) > > +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml Sun Nov 11 22:29:01 2012 (r39981) > > @@ -923,7 +923,7 @@ > > <para>Where the format is > > <literal>html-split</literal>, the files are bundled > > up using &man.tar.1;. The resulting > > - <filename>.tar</filename> file is then compressed > > + <filename>.tar</filename> is then compressed > > This would seem like a candidate where the "redundant" use of "file" > actually is helpful, since there is not a specific file name given. > [...] Well, can we avoid all these sort of changes? They are necessary? [...] > > + to make this work. See &man.chmod.1; and > > + &man.symlink.7; for more information.</para> > > > > <warning> > > - <para>The <option>-R</option> option does a > > + <para><option>-R</option> does a > > My understanding was that we did not like to start sentences with markup. > Same here, again "redundant" useless sweep... Please guys, stop these silly "redundant" commits. -- Marc
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