Date: Fri, 13 Oct 2006 12:43:43 +0100 From: Ceri Davies <ceri@submonkey.net> To: Tom Rhodes <trhodes@FreeBSD.org> Cc: doc-committers@FreeBSD.org, cvs-doc@FreeBSD.org, cvs-all@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook book.sgml Message-ID: <20061013114342.GK24163@submonkey.net> In-Reply-To: <200610131029.k9DATqdc082510@repoman.freebsd.org> References: <200610131029.k9DATqdc082510@repoman.freebsd.org>
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On Fri, Oct 13, 2006 at 10:29:52AM +0000, Tom Rhodes wrote:
> trhodes 2006-10-13 10:29:52 UTC
>=20
> FreeBSD doc repository
>=20
> Modified files:
> en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook book.sgml=20
> Log:
> "Many sections do not yet exist" sounds very misleading to me. Reword
> slightly to be more in line with the current state of our handbook.
> | --- doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/book.sgml 2006/05/16 14:01:06 1.=
166
> | +++ doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/book.sgml 2006/10/13 10:29:51 1.=
167
> | @@ -124,8 +124,8 @@
> | to day use of <emphasis>FreeBSD &rel2.current;-RELEASE</emphasis>
> | and <emphasis>FreeBSD &rel.current;-RELEASE</emphasis>.
> | This manual is a <emphasis>work in progress</emphasis> and is the work
> | - of many individuals. Many sections do not yet exist and some of those
> | - that do exist need to be updated. If you are interested in helping
> | + of many individuals. As such, some sections may become dated and need
> | + updated. If you are interested in helping out
=2E.. and require updating.
Ceri
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That must be wonderful! I don't understand it at all.
-- Moliere
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