Date: Thu, 15 Sep 2005 16:09:08 +0000 (UTC) From: "Gary W. Swearingen" <garys@FreeBSD.org> To: doc-committers@FreeBSD.org, cvs-doc@FreeBSD.org, cvs-all@FreeBSD.org Subject: cvs commit: www/en/docproj sgml.sgml Message-ID: <200509151609.j8FG98uR089319@repoman.freebsd.org>
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garys 2005-09-15 16:09:08 UTC
FreeBSD doc repository
Modified files:
en/docproj sgml.sgml
Log:
Changed various problems, mostly in wordage, including:
= Changed "purists...that" to "purists...who".
= Changed parenthetical explanation of "tags".
= Changed "added" to "defined" since elements were not added.
= Replaced awkward use of "related things".
= Changed awkward non-possessive "<filename>'s" to
"<filename> elements".
= Removed too-restrictive "If you are familiar with them,".
= Reworded "I found the best way" from anonymous page.
= Removed "that" that referred to nothing.
= Changed "have got" to "have".
= Changed "they'll" to FDP's "they will".
= Changed too-informal "stuff" to "version".
= Removed erroneous "too" in small rewording that shortened a long
sentence.
= Removed unnecessary "You should".
= Combined two paras on the same thing, changing "file" to "page".
= Inserted apostrophe in "beginners".
= Changed a quote char to an entity, twice.
Approved by: keramida
Revision Changes Path
1.25 +22 -23 www/en/docproj/sgml.sgml
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