Date: Tue, 21 May 2013 20:50:32 +0000 (UTC) From: Tom Rhodes <trhodes@FreeBSD.org> To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-projects@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r41703 - in projects/ISBN_1-57176-407-0/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook: basics config ports Message-ID: <201305212050.r4LKoWu1052874@svn.freebsd.org>
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Author: trhodes Date: Tue May 21 20:50:32 2013 New Revision: 41703 URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/41703 Log: Some wording fixes. Noted by: bcr, wblock, bjk Modified: projects/ISBN_1-57176-407-0/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/basics/chapter.xml projects/ISBN_1-57176-407-0/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.xml projects/ISBN_1-57176-407-0/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports/chapter.xml Modified: projects/ISBN_1-57176-407-0/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/basics/chapter.xml ============================================================================== --- projects/ISBN_1-57176-407-0/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/basics/chapter.xml Tue May 21 19:51:40 2013 (r41702) +++ projects/ISBN_1-57176-407-0/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/basics/chapter.xml Tue May 21 20:50:32 2013 (r41703) @@ -302,13 +302,13 @@ console none managing requests for hardware devices, peripherals, memory, and CPU time fairly to each user.</para> - <para>Much more information about User Accounts is in the chapter - about <link linkend="users">accounts</link>. For now you just - need to know that each person (user) who uses the computer should be + <para>Much more information about user accounts is in the chapter + about <link linkend="users">accounts</link>. It is important to + understand that each person (user) who uses the computer should be given their own username and password. The system keeps track of the people using the computer based on this username. Since it is often the case that several people are working on the same - project Unix also provides groups. Several users can be placed + project &unix; also provides groups. Several users can be placed in the same group.</para> <para>Because the system is capable of supporting multiple users, Modified: projects/ISBN_1-57176-407-0/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.xml ============================================================================== --- projects/ISBN_1-57176-407-0/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.xml Tue May 21 19:51:40 2013 (r41702) +++ projects/ISBN_1-57176-407-0/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.xml Tue May 21 20:50:32 2013 (r41703) @@ -1962,8 +1962,8 @@ device_probe_and_attach: cbb0 attach ret <para>The following section will discuss various tuning mechanisms and options which may be applied to disk devices. In many cases, disks with mechanical parts, - such as <acronym>SCSI</acronym> drives, will be the bottle - neck driving down the overall system performance. While + such as <acronym>SCSI</acronym> drives, will be the + bottleneck driving down the overall system performance. While a solution is to install a drive without mechanical parts, such as a solid state drive, mechanical drives are not going away anytime in the near future. When tuning disks, Modified: projects/ISBN_1-57176-407-0/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports/chapter.xml ============================================================================== --- projects/ISBN_1-57176-407-0/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports/chapter.xml Tue May 21 19:51:40 2013 (r41702) +++ projects/ISBN_1-57176-407-0/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports/chapter.xml Tue May 21 20:50:32 2013 (r41703) @@ -1795,12 +1795,12 @@ ftp://ftp.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/ports/ post-install port management. In several cases, finding the location of binaries if they were installed outside of the <envar>PATH</envar>. Users of &man.csh.1; should run - the <command>rehash</command> to rebuild the known binary + <command>rehash</command> to rebuild the known binary list in the shells <envar>PATH</envar>.</para> <itemizedlist> <listitem> - <para>The &man.pkg.info.1; will print all installed + <para>The &man.pkg.info.1; command will print all installed files and their location. For example, if the FooPackage version 1.0.0 was just installed, then the following command will show all the files installed with the @@ -1808,7 +1808,7 @@ ftp://ftp.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/ports/ <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>pkg_info -L <replaceable>foopackage-1.0.0</replaceable> | less</userinput></screen> - <para>Configuration files are always installed in the + <para>Configuration files are always installed in <filename role="directory">/usr/local/etc</filename> and should definitely be consulted before attempting to use the new application.</para> @@ -1833,8 +1833,8 @@ ftp://ftp.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/ports/ <listitem> <para>If the application has a web site, consult it for - additional documentation, frequently asked questions, or - a forum. If the website is unknown, the following command + additional documentation or a frequently asked questions + page. If the website is unknown, the following command will be useful to print out this information if it's available.</para>home | help
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