Date: Sat, 1 Nov 2008 21:17:04 GMT From: Rene Ladan <rene@FreeBSD.org> To: Perforce Change Reviews <perforce@FreeBSD.org> Subject: PERFORCE change 152329 for review Message-ID: <200811012117.mA1LH4F3032223@repoman.freebsd.org>
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http://perforce.freebsd.org/chv.cgi?CH=152329 Change 152329 by rene@rene_self on 2008/11/01 21:16:46 Oops, do two things at once: * IFC * Translate 'contributing' article up to 13% Affected files ... .. //depot/projects/docproj_nl/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/contributors/contrib.committers.sgml#11 integrate .. //depot/projects/docproj_nl/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/sgml-primer/chapter.sgml#2 integrate .. //depot/projects/docproj_nl/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.sgml#5 integrate .. //depot/projects/docproj_nl/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.sgml#3 integrate .. //depot/projects/docproj_nl/en_US.ISO8859-1/share/sgml/authors.ent#10 integrate .. //depot/projects/docproj_nl/nl_NL.ISO8859-1/articles/contributing/article.sgml#2 edit .. //depot/projects/docproj_nl/share/pgpkeys/pgpkeys-developers.sgml#8 integrate .. //depot/projects/docproj_nl/share/pgpkeys/pgpkeys.ent#8 integrate .. //depot/projects/docproj_nl/share/pgpkeys/versus.key#1 branch .. //depot/projects/docproj_nl/www/en/developers.sgml#8 integrate .. //depot/projects/docproj_nl/www/en/releases/6.4R/schedule.sgml#7 integrate .. //depot/projects/docproj_nl/www/en/releng/index.sgml#6 integrate .. //depot/projects/docproj_nl/www/share/sgml/news.xml#14 integrate Differences ... ==== //depot/projects/docproj_nl/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/contributors/contrib.committers.sgml#11 (text+ko) ==== @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -<!-- $FreeBSD: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/contributors/contrib.committers.sgml,v 1.245 2008/10/06 13:59:02 lstewart Exp $ --> +<!-- $FreeBSD: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/contributors/contrib.committers.sgml,v 1.246 2008/11/01 11:08:11 versus Exp $ --> <!-- NOTE TO NEW COMMITTERS: Core and committers lists are sorted in alphabetical order by last name. Please keep in mind that fact while @@ -547,6 +547,10 @@ </listitem> <listitem> + <para>&a.versus;</para> + </listitem> + + <listitem> <para>&a.raj;</para> </listitem> ==== //depot/projects/docproj_nl/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/sgml-primer/chapter.sgml#2 (text+ko) ==== @@ -27,7 +27,7 @@ ANY WAY OUT OF THE USE OF THIS DOCUMENTATION, EVEN IF ADVISED OF THE POSSIBILITY OF SUCH DAMAGE. - $FreeBSD: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/sgml-primer/chapter.sgml,v 1.47 2007/12/30 02:40:32 danger Exp $ + $FreeBSD: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/sgml-primer/chapter.sgml,v 1.48 2008/10/31 12:23:35 pgj Exp $ --> <chapter id="sgml-primer"> @@ -65,8 +65,8 @@ like that, and our computers require some assistance before they can meaningfully process our text.</para> - <para>More precisely, they need help identifying what is what. You or I - can look at + <para>More precisely, they need help identifying what is what. Let's + look at this text:</para> <blockquote> <para>To remove <filename>/tmp/foo</filename> use &man.rm.1;.</para> @@ -74,7 +74,7 @@ <screen>&prompt.user; <userinput>rm /tmp/foo</userinput></screen> </blockquote> - and easily see which parts are filenames, which are commands to be typed + <para>It is easy to see which parts are filenames, which are commands to be typed in, which parts are references to manual pages, and so on. But the computer processing the document cannot. For this we need markup.</para> @@ -204,15 +204,15 @@ <para>For an element called <replaceable>element-name</replaceable> the start tag will normally look like - <literal><<replaceable>element-name</replaceable>></literal>. The + <sgmltag><replaceable>element-name</replaceable></sgmltag>. The corresponding closing tag for this element is - <literal></<replaceable>element-name</replaceable>></literal>.</para> + <sgmltag>/<replaceable>element-name</replaceable></sgmltag>.</para> <example> <title>Using an element (start and end tags)</title> <para>HTML has an element for indicating that the content enclosed by - the element is a paragraph, called <literal>p</literal>. This + the element is a paragraph, called <sgmltag>p</sgmltag>. This element has both start and end tags.</para> <programlisting><![ CDATA [<p>This is a paragraph. It starts with the start tag for @@ -231,7 +231,7 @@ <title>Using an element (start tag only)</title> <para>HTML has an element for indicating a horizontal rule, called - <literal>hr</literal>. This element does not wrap content, so only + <sgmltag>hr</sgmltag>. This element does not wrap content, so only has a start tag.</para> <programlisting><![ CDATA [<p>This is a paragraph.</p> @@ -266,10 +266,10 @@ end.</para> <para>When this document (or anyone else knowledgeable about SGML) refers - to <quote>the <p> tag</quote> they mean the literal text + to <quote>the <sgmltag>p</sgmltag> tag</quote> they mean the literal text consisting of the three characters <literal><</literal>, <literal>p</literal>, and <literal>></literal>. But the phrase - <quote>the <p> element</quote> refers to the whole + <quote>the <sgmltag>p</sgmltag> element</quote> refers to the whole element.</para> <para>This distinction <emphasis>is</emphasis> very subtle. But keep it @@ -287,7 +287,7 @@ <literal><replaceable>attribute-name</replaceable>="<replaceable>attribute-value</replaceable>"</literal>.</para> <para>In sufficiently recent versions of HTML, the <sgmltag>p</sgmltag> - element has an attribute called <literal>align</literal>, which suggests + element has an attribute called <sgmltag>align</sgmltag>, which suggests an alignment (justification) for the paragraph to the program displaying the HTML.</para> @@ -494,7 +494,7 @@ <row> <entry>6</entry> - <entry>The text of the error message.</entry> + <entry>The text of the message.</entry> </row> </tbody> </tgroup> @@ -519,7 +519,7 @@ </step> <step> - <para>Put the <literal>title</literal> element back in.</para> + <para>Put the <sgmltag>title</sgmltag> element back in.</para> </step> </procedure> </sect2> @@ -781,7 +781,7 @@ <sect1 id="sgml-primer-sgml-escape"> <title>Escaping back to SGML</title> - <para>Earlier in this primer I said that SGML is only used when writing a + <para>As mentioned earlier, SGML is only used when writing a DTD. This is not strictly true. There is certain SGML syntax that you will want to be able to use within your documents. For example, comments can be included in your document, and will be ignored by the @@ -1379,7 +1379,7 @@ characters.</para> <para><literal>RCDATA</literal> is for <quote>Entity references and - character data</quote> If the parser is in this content model then it + character data</quote>. If the parser is in this content model then it is expecting to see characters <emphasis>and</emphasis> entities. <literal><</literal> loses its special status, but <literal>&</literal> will still be treated as @@ -1392,7 +1392,7 @@ <literal><</literal> is converted to a <literal>&lt;</literal> and every <literal>&</literal> is converted to a <literal>&amp;</literal>, it can be - easier to mark the section as only containing CDATA. When the SGML + easier to mark the section as only containing <literal>CDATA</literal>. When the SGML parser encounters this it will ignore the <literal><</literal> and <literal>&</literal> symbols embedded in the content.</para> @@ -1534,7 +1534,7 @@ <body> <p>This paragraph <![ CDATA [contains many < characters (< < < < <) so it is easier - to wrap it in a CDATA marked section ]]></p> + to wrap it in a CDATA marked section.]]></p> <