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Date:      Tue, 29 Jun 2021 02:10:53 GMT
From:      Warner Losh <imp@FreeBSD.org>
To:        src-committers@FreeBSD.org, dev-commits-src-all@FreeBSD.org, dev-commits-src-main@FreeBSD.org
Subject:   git: 857cde693f26 - main - UPDATING: Fix typos / improve langauge
Message-ID:  <202106290210.15T2ArG9051263@gitrepo.freebsd.org>

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The branch main has been updated by imp:

URL: https://cgit.FreeBSD.org/src/commit/?id=857cde693f26ba558fbacf86aa2f2313d29a02cd

commit 857cde693f26ba558fbacf86aa2f2313d29a02cd
Author:     Maigurs Stalidzans <maigurs.stalidzans@icloud.com>
AuthorDate: 2021-06-29 01:27:30 +0000
Commit:     Warner Losh <imp@FreeBSD.org>
CommitDate: 2021-06-29 01:42:17 +0000

    UPDATING: Fix typos / improve langauge
    
    This fixes a couple of typos in older entries, and clarifies the
    language of a newer one. It also removes a joke that trips up
    foreign readers due its use of faux archaic English.
    
    Reviewed by: imp@
---
 UPDATING | 10 +++++-----
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

diff --git a/UPDATING b/UPDATING
index dbedcd058585..35994b25a2f1 100644
--- a/UPDATING
+++ b/UPDATING
@@ -593,8 +593,8 @@ https://lists.freebsd.org/archives/freebsd-current/2021-June/000153.html
 	r342286 modifies the NFSv4 server so that it obeys vfs.nfsd.nfs_privport
 	in the same as it is applied to NFSv2 and 3.  This implies that NFSv4
 	servers that have vfs.nfsd.nfs_privport set will only allow mounts
-	from clients using a reserved port#. Since both the FreeBSD and Linux
-	NFSv4 clients use reserved port#s by default, this should not affect
+	from clients using a reserved port. Since both the FreeBSD and Linux
+	NFSv4 clients use reserved ports by default, this should not affect
 	most NFSv4 mounts.
 
 20181219:
@@ -1036,7 +1036,7 @@ https://lists.freebsd.org/archives/freebsd-current/2021-June/000153.html
 	Newer versions of loader can boot old kernels without issue.
 
 20171110:
-	The LOADER_FIREWIRE_SUPPORT build variable as been renamed to
+	The LOADER_FIREWIRE_SUPPORT build variable has been renamed to
 	WITH/OUT_LOADER_FIREWIRE. LOADER_{NO_,}GELI_SUPPORT has been renamed
 	to WITH/OUT_LOADER_GELI.
 
@@ -1220,7 +1220,7 @@ https://lists.freebsd.org/archives/freebsd-current/2021-June/000153.html
 	If you have if_ath_pci in /boot/loader.conf, ensure it is after
 	if_ath or it will not load any HAL chipset support.
 
-	If you want to selectively load things (eg on ye cheape ARM/MIPS
+	If you want to selectively load things (eg on cheaper ARM/MIPS
 	platforms where RAM is at a premium) you should:
 
 	* load ath_hal
@@ -1444,7 +1444,7 @@ https://lists.freebsd.org/archives/freebsd-current/2021-June/000153.html
 	kernel.
 
 20160527:
-	CAM will now strip leading spaces from SCSI disks' serial numbers.
+	CAM now strips the leading spaces from each SCSI disk's serial number.
 	This will affect users who create UFS filesystems on SCSI disks using
 	those disk's diskid device nodes.  For example, if /etc/fstab
 	previously contained a line like



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