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Date:      Wed, 5 Jun 2013 10:32:13 +0000 (UTC)
From:      Hiroki Sato <hrs@FreeBSD.org>
To:        doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org
Subject:   svn commit: r41843 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/releases/8.4R
Message-ID:  <201306051032.r55AWDJp042164@svn.freebsd.org>

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Author: hrs
Date: Wed Jun  5 10:32:13 2013
New Revision: 41843
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/41843

Log:
  Fix various grammatical errors.
  
  Submitted by:	koobs

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/releases/8.4R/relnotes-detailed.html

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/releases/8.4R/relnotes-detailed.html
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/releases/8.4R/relnotes-detailed.html	Wed Jun  5 02:59:45 2013	(r41842)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/releases/8.4R/relnotes-detailed.html	Wed Jun  5 10:32:13 2013	(r41843)
@@ -649,7 +649,7 @@ target="_top">r240570</a>]</p>
 <p>The <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=ukbd&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">ukbd</span>(4)</span></a> driver
-now supports &#09; Microsoft Natural Egronomic Keyboard 4000. It had an issue &#09; that
+now supports &#09; Microsoft Natural Ergonomic Keyboard 4000. It had an issue &#09; that
 function keys were not recognized.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=239426"
 target="_top">r239426</a>]</p>
@@ -746,7 +746,7 @@ target="_top">r238674</a>]</p>
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=snd_hda&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">snd_hda</span>(4)</span></a>
 driver &#09; has been updated. It now supports and provides HDMI, new &#09; volume
-control, automatic recording source selection, &#09; runtime reconfiguration, more then 4
+control, automatic recording source selection, &#09; runtime reconfiguration, more than 4
 PCM devices on a &#09; controller, multichannel recording, additional &#09;
 playback/record streams, higher bandwidth, and more &#09; informative device names.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=236750"
@@ -797,22 +797,22 @@ target="_top">r246725</a>]</p>
 <p>Link state change handling in the &#09; <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=ale&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">ale</span>(4)</span></a> network
-driver has been improved.[<a
+interface driver has been improved.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=234127"
 target="_top">r234127</a>]</p>
 
 <p>The <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=ale&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">ale</span>(4)</span></a> network
-driver now &#09; supports flow control.[<a
+interface driver now &#09; supports flow control.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=234241"
 target="_top">r234241</a>]</p>
 
 <p>A bug in the <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=bce&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">bce</span>(4)</span></a> network
-&#09; driver has been fixed. It could prevent jumbo frame &#09; configuration from
-working.[<a href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=235424"
+&#09; interface driver has been fixed. It could prevent jumbo frame &#09; configuration
+from working.[<a href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=235424"
 target="_top">r235424</a>]</p>
 
 <p>A bug in <a
@@ -826,18 +826,18 @@ target="_top">r236217</a>]</p>
 <p>The <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=bce&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">bce</span>(4)</span></a> network
-driver now &#09; supports remote PHYs, which allow the controller to perform &#09; MDIO
-type accesses to a remote transceiver by using message &#09; pages defined through MRBE
-(MultiRate Backplane &#09; Ethernet). This is found on machines such as the Dell &#09;
-PowerEdge M610 Blade.[<a
+interface driver now &#09; supports remote PHYs, which allow the controller to perform
+&#09; MDIO type accesses to a remote transceiver by using message &#09; pages defined
+through MRBE (MultiRate Backplane &#09; Ethernet). This is found on machines such as the
+Dell &#09; PowerEdge M610 Blade.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=235819"
 target="_top">r235819</a>]</p>
 
 <p>A bug in the <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=bge&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">bge</span>(4)</span></a> network
-&#09; driver which could cause watchdog timeout on BCM5704 &#09; controller connected
-behind AMD 8131 PCI-X bridge has been &#09; fixed.[<a
+&#09; interface driver which could cause watchdog timeout on BCM5704 &#09; controller
+connected behind AMD 8131 PCI-X bridge has been &#09; fixed.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=233496"
 target="_top">r233496</a>]</p>
 
@@ -865,7 +865,7 @@ could &#09; make the device stop working
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=236219"
 target="_top">r236219</a>]</p>
 
-<p>[amd64, i386, pc98] <a
+<p>[amd64, i386, pc98] The <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=cas&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">cas</span>(4)</span></a>, &#09; <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=gem&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">;
@@ -903,18 +903,18 @@ target="_top">r247430</a>]</p>
 <p>The <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=fxp&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">fxp</span>(4)</span></a> network
-driver has &#09; been improved. It does not cause unnecessary media change &#09; in
-controller reconfiguration such as promiscuos mode &#09; change which leads to an extra
-link &#09; reestablishment.[<a
+interface driver has &#09; been improved. It does not cause unnecessary media change
+&#09; in controller reconfiguration such as promiscuos mode &#09; change which leads to
+an extra link &#09; reestablishment.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=233502"
 target="_top">r233502</a>]</p>
 
 <p>The <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=igb&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">igb</span>(4)</span></a> network
-driver now &#09; attempts to attach as many CPUs as possible to each queue. &#09; If the
-number of CPUs are greater than or equal to the &#09; number of queues, all of queues are
-bound to different &#09; CPUs.[<a
+interface driver now &#09; attempts to attach as many CPUs as possible to each queue.
+&#09; If the number of CPUs are greater than or equal to the &#09; number of queues, all
+queues are bound to different &#09; CPUs.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=235616"
 target="_top">r235616</a>]</p>
 
@@ -942,8 +942,8 @@ target="_top">r247501</a>]</p>
 <p>A bug in <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=ixgbe&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">ixgbe</span>(4)</span></a> network
-&#09; driver has been fixed. It could cause a packet loss in &#09; TCP communication when
-TSO (TCP Segmentation Offload) is &#09; enabled.[<a
+&#09; interface driver has been fixed. It could cause packet loss in &#09; TCP
+communication when TSO (TCP Segmentation Offload) is &#09; enabled.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=235666"
 target="_top">r235666</a>]</p>
 
@@ -964,7 +964,7 @@ target="_top">r248062</a>]</p>
 <p>The <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=ral&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">ral</span>(4)</span></a> network
-driver now &#09; supports Ralink RT2800 and RT3000 chipsets.[<a
+interface driver now &#09; supports Ralink RT2800 and RT3000 chipsets.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=236008"
 target="_top">r236008</a>]</p>
 
@@ -972,16 +972,17 @@ target="_top">r236008</a>]</p>
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=re&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE"><span
  class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">re</span>(4)</span></a> and &#09; <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=rl&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE"><span
- class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">rl</span>(4)</span></a> network drivers
-which could cause a problem on &#09; RTL8139 family has been fixed.[<a
+ class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">rl</span>(4)</span></a> network
+interface drivers which could cause a problem on &#09; RTL8139 family has been fixed.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=233490"
 target="_top">r233490</a>]</p>
 
 <p>A bug in the <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=re&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE"><span
  class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">re</span>(4)</span></a> network &#09;
-driver which could cause intermittent link up/down on &#09; RTL8169 controller has been
-fixed.[<a href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=233493"
+interface driver which could cause intermittent link up/down on &#09; RTL8169 controller
+has been fixed.[<a
+href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=233493"
 target="_top">r233493</a>]</p>
 
 <p>The <a
@@ -1008,23 +1009,24 @@ target="_top">r232594</a>]</p>
 <p>The <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=run&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">run</span>(4)</span></a> network
-driver now &#09; load the firmware upon initialization, not attachment. &#09; This fixes
-an issue when the root filesystem is not &#09; available at the time of the device
+interface driver now &#09; loads the firmware upon initialization, not attachment. &#09;
+This fixes an issue when the root filesystem is not &#09; available at the time of device
 detection.[<a href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=233461"
 target="_top">r233461</a>]</p>
 
 <p>The <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=run&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">run</span>(4)</span></a> driver
-has been &#09; updated to firmware verion 0.236.[<a
+has been &#09; updated to firmware version 0.236.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=234029"
 target="_top">r234029</a>]</p>
 
 <p>The <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=sf&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE"><span
- class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">sf</span>(4)</span></a> network driver
-has &#09; been improved. A system load fluctuation under high network &#09; load has been
-fixed.[<a href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=233487"
+ class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">sf</span>(4)</span></a> network
+interface driver has &#09; been improved. System load fluctuation under high network
+&#09; load has been fixed.[<a
+href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=233487"
 target="_top">r233487</a>]</p>
 
 <p>The <a
@@ -1062,10 +1064,10 @@ target="_top">r242984</a>]</p>
 <hr />
 <h4 class="sect3"><a id="net-proto" name="net-proto">2.2.3 Network Protocols</a></h4>
 
-<p>The <a
+<p>Locking performance of the <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=bpf&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">;
-<span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">bpf</span>(4)</span></a> Berkeley
-Packet Filter &#09; has been improved in the locking performance.[<a
+<span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">bpf</span>(4)</span></a> &#09;
+Berkeley Packet Filter has been improved.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=247732"
 target="_top">r247732</a>]</p>
 
@@ -1073,8 +1075,8 @@ target="_top">r247732</a>]</p>
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=if_bridge&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">if_bridge</span>(4)</span></a>
 pseudo network &#09; interface driver now supports multiple bridges in the same &#09; STP
-domain. It used the same MAC address as the bridge ID &#09; for all bridges on the
-system.[<a href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=236056"
+domain. It used the same MAC address as the bridge ID &#09; for all bridges on the system
+before.[<a href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=236056"
 target="_top">r236056</a>]</p>
 
 <p>The <a
@@ -1089,13 +1091,14 @@ target="_top">r236058</a>]</p>
 <p>The <code class="varname">net.link.bridge</code> &#09; <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=sysctl&sektion=8&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">sysctl</span>(8)</span></a>
-variables can be set in <a
+variables can now be set in <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=loader&sektion=8&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">loader</span>(8)</span></a> and/or
 &#09; <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=loader.conf&sektion=5&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">;
-<span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">loader.conf</span>(5)</span></a>
-now.[<a href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=236072"
+<span class="citerefentry"><span
+class="refentrytitle">loader.conf</span>(5)</span></a>.[<a
+href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=236072"
 target="_top">r236072</a>]</p>
 
 <p>The default number of the bridge &#09; forwarding cache entries of the <a
@@ -1127,8 +1130,7 @@ target="_top">r234637</a>]</p>
 
 <p><tt class="literal">IP_RECVTOS</tt> socket &#09; option to receive for received
 UDP/IPv4 packets a cmsg of type &#09; IP_RECVTOS which contains the TOS byte has been
-implemented. &#09; This allows to implement a protocol on top of UDP and &#09;
-implementing ECN.[<a
+implemented. &#09; This allows access to the ECN bits in a protocol on top of UDP.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=247944"
 target="_top">r247944</a>]</p>
 
@@ -1163,18 +1165,18 @@ class="filename">draft-gont-6man-ipv6-at
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=238495"
 target="_top">r238495</a>]</p>
 
-<p>A bug which could cause a system panic &#09; in multicast routing in kernel with <code
-class="option">VIMAGE</code> &#09; kernel option has been fixed. This option is disabled
-in &#09; <tt class="filename">GENERIC</tt> kernel.[<a
+<p>A bug which could cause a system panic &#09; in the multicast routing in kernel with
+<code class="option">VIMAGE</code> &#09; kernel option has been fixed. This option is
+disabled in &#09; <tt class="filename">GENERIC</tt> kernel.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=233605"
 target="_top">r233605</a>]</p>
 
 <p>The <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=lagg&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">lagg</span>(4)</span></a> pseudo
-network &#09; driver now allows to set which layers are used for the load &#09; balance
-hash calculation. It can be set in &#09; <tt class="command">ifconfig lagghash</tt>
-option in a &#09; comma-separated list. The default value is <code
+network &#09; driver now allows the configuration of which layers are used for the load
+&#09; balance hash calculation. It can be set in &#09; <tt class="command">ifconfig
+lagghash</tt> option in a &#09; comma-separated list. The default value is <code
 class="option">lagghash &#09; l2,l3,l4</code>. For more detail, see <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=ifconfig&sektion=8&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">ifconfig</span>(8)</span></a>
@@ -1224,9 +1226,10 @@ href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=235056"
 target="_top">r235056</a>]</p>
 
-<p>A loader tunable &#09; <code class="varname">net.fibs</code> now supports to specify
-the &#09; number of routing tables. The <code class="option">ROUTETABLES</code> &#09;
-kernel option can still be used to set the default number of &#09; routing tables.[<a
+<p>A loader tunable &#09; <code class="varname">net.fibs</code> now supports to
+specifying the &#09; number of routing tables. The <code
+class="option">ROUTETABLES</code> &#09; kernel option can still be used to set the
+default number of &#09; routing tables.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=235104"
 target="_top">r235104</a>]</p>
 
@@ -1236,7 +1239,7 @@ href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi
 <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=stf&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">stf</span>(4)</span></a>
-interface.[<a href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=233245"
+interfaces.[<a href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=233245"
 target="_top">r233245</a>, <a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=233246"
 target="_top">r233246</a>]</p>
@@ -1262,8 +1265,8 @@ target="_top">r232819</a>]</p>
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=tcp&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">tcp</span>(4)</span></a> host
 &#09; cache has been fixed. It could cause extra ICMP message &#09; exchanges when an
-ICMP unreach is received but allocation of &#09; the corresponding TCP host cache is
-failed.[<a href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=235053"
+ICMP unreach is received but allocation of &#09; the corresponding TCP host cache
+fails.[<a href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=235053"
 target="_top">r235053</a>]</p>
 
 <p>A <a
@@ -1385,10 +1388,10 @@ class="varname">kern.cam.ada.send_ordere
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=247105"
 target="_top">r247105</a>]</p>
 
-<p>The <a
+<p>Performance of the <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=da&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE"><span
- class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">da</span>(4)</span></a> driver has been
-&#09; improved in performance of subsequent &#09; <tt class="literal">BIO_DELETE</tt>
+ class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">da</span>(4)</span></a> driver &#09;
+has been improved. It now handles subsequent &#09; <tt class="literal">BIO_DELETE</tt>
 requests handled as a single &#09; <tt class="literal">TRIM</tt> request.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=234914"
 target="_top">r234914</a>]</p>
@@ -1403,7 +1406,7 @@ target="_top">r245941</a>]</p>
 <p>The <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=hptiop&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">hptiop</span>(4)</span></a> driver
-has &#09; bee updated to version 1.8 and now supports HighPoint &#09; RocketRAID
+has &#09; been updated to version 1.8 and now supports HighPoint &#09; RocketRAID
 4500/4311/4310/4211/4210/3560/3530.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=239159"
 target="_top">r239159</a>, <a
@@ -1566,7 +1569,8 @@ target="_top">r243679</a>]</p>
 <p>The <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=tmpfs&sektion=5&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">tmpfs</span>(5)</span></a>
-filesystem is not an &#09; experimental implementation anymore.[<a
+filesystem is &#09; production ready, and no longer considered an experimental &#09;
+implementation.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=234512"
 target="_top">r234512</a>]</p>
 
@@ -1610,8 +1614,8 @@ target="_top">r247808</a>]</p>
 <p>Bugs in <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=msdosfs&sektion=5&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">msdosfs</span>(5)</span></a> &#09;
-which could fail a FAT32 filesystem to mount, create a &#09; broken directory entry in a
-FAT32 filesystem, and prevent &#09; <code class="option">sync</code> and <code
+which could cause mounting a FAT32 filesystem to fail, create a &#09; broken directory
+entry in a FAT32 filesystem, and prevent &#09; <code class="option">sync</code> and <code
 class="option">async</code> mount &#09; option from working, have been fixed.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=246547"
 target="_top">r246547</a>, <a
@@ -1665,7 +1669,7 @@ target="_top">r232665</a>]</p>
 
 <p>FreeBSD ZFS subsystem has &#09; been updated to support feature flags for ZFS pools
 (the SPA &#09; version is 5000). Asynchronous destroy of ZFS dataset, LZ4 &#09;
-compression, ZIO NOP-write optimization have been &#09; implemented as new feature. <a
+compression, ZIO NOP-write optimization have been &#09; implemented as new features. <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=loader&sektion=8&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">loader</span>(8)</span></a>
 tunables &#09; <code class="varname">vfs.zfs.sync_pass_deferred_free</code>, &#09; <code
@@ -1679,11 +1683,11 @@ target="_top">r244088</a>, <a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=247310"
 target="_top">r247310</a>]</p>
 
-<p>Note that this upgrade can cause interoperability issue &#09; when upgrading a FreeBSD
-8.4 system to 9.0 or 9.1. This is &#09; because FreeBSD 9.0 and 9.1 support SPA version
-28 and do not &#09; recognize version 5000. To mitigate this issue, the default &#09; SPA
-version for a newly created ZFS pool on FreeBSD 8.4 is set &#09; to version 28. To create
-a ZFS pool with version 5000, use &#09; <a
+<p>Note that this upgrade can cause interoperability issues &#09; when upgrading a
+FreeBSD 8.4 system to 9.0 or 9.1. This is &#09; because FreeBSD 9.0 and 9.1 support SPA
+version 28 and do not &#09; recognize version 5000. To mitigate this issue, the default
+&#09; SPA version for a newly created ZFS pool on FreeBSD 8.4 is set &#09; to version 28.
+To create a ZFS pool with version 5000, use &#09; <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=zpool&sektion=8&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">zpool</span>(8)</span></a> <tt
 class="command">upgrade</tt> command after the &#09; creation.</p>
@@ -1717,8 +1721,8 @@ target="_top">r242991</a>]</p>
 <p>The <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=chkgrp&sektion=8&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">chkgrp</span>(8)</span></a>
-utility now supports &#09;<code class="option">-q</code> flag to disable printing of text
-when the &#09;group format is correct.[<a
+utility now supports &#09;a <code class="option">-q</code> flag to disable printing of
+text when the &#09;group format is correct.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=244064"
 target="_top">r244064</a>]</p>
 
@@ -1738,7 +1742,7 @@ target="_top">r239877</a>]</p>
 <p>The <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=cut&sektion=1&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">cut</span>(1)</span></a> utility
-now supports &#09;<code class="option">-w</code> flag to specify whitespace as the
+now supports &#09;a <code class="option">-w</code> flag to specify whitespace as the
 &#09;delimiter.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=244305"
 target="_top">r244305</a>]</p>
@@ -1759,15 +1763,15 @@ target="_top">r242642</a>]</p>
 <p>The <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=daemon&sektion=8&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">daemon</span>(8)</span></a>
-utility now supports &#09;<code class="option">-r</code> flag to restart the program if
-it has been &#09;terminated.[<a
+utility now supports &#09;an <code class="option">-r</code> flag to restart the program
+if it has been &#09;terminated.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=233762"
 target="_top">r233762</a>]</p>
 
 <p>The <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=devd&sektion=8&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">devd</span>(8)</span></a> daemon
-now supports &#09;<tt class="literal">!</tt> character in regex matching in &#09;<a
+now supports &#09;the <tt class="literal">!</tt> character in regex matching in &#09;<a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=devd.conf&sektion=5&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">devd.conf</span>(5)</span></a>. It
 inverts the logic of the &#09;matching.[<a
@@ -1790,7 +1794,7 @@ target="_top">r233867</a>]</p>
 <p>The <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=du&sektion=1&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE"><span
  class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">du</span>(1)</span></a> utility now
-supports &#09;<code class="option">-g</code> flag to display the results in
+supports &#09;a <code class="option">-g</code> flag to display the results in
 &#09;gigabytes.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=247539"
 target="_top">r247539</a>]</p>
@@ -1798,11 +1802,11 @@ target="_top">r247539</a>]</p>
 <p>The <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=fetch&sektion=1&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">fetch</span>(1)</span></a> utility
-now supports &#09;percent-encoded string in user and password component of a &#09;URL.[<a
-href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=235254"
+now supports &#09;percent-encoded strings in user and password component of a
+&#09;URL.[<a href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=235254"
 target="_top">r235254</a>]</p>
 
-<p>The maximum number of HTTP redirection &#09;has been increased from <tt
+<p>The maximum number of HTTP redirections &#09;has been increased from <tt
 class="literal">5</tt> to &#09;<tt class="literal">20</tt> in the <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=fetch&sektion=1&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">fetch</span>(1)</span></a>
@@ -1812,14 +1816,14 @@ target="_top">r242034</a>]</p>
 <p>The <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=fetch&sektion=1&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">fetch</span>(1)</span></a> utility
-now &#09;supports HTTP status code <tt class="literal">305</tt> (Use Proxy) &#09;and <tt
+now &#09;supports HTTP status codes <tt class="literal">305</tt> (Use Proxy) &#09;and <tt
 class="literal">308</tt> (Permanent Redirect).[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=242288"
 target="_top">r242288</a>, <a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=242291"
 target="_top">r242291</a>]</p>
 
-<p>A countermeasure against a possible DoS &#09;(Denial of Service) attack described in
+<p>A countermeasure against possible DoS &#09;(Denial of Service) attack described in
 CVE-2010-2632 in the &#09;<a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=ftpd&sektion=8&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">ftpd</span>(8)</span></a> daemon
@@ -1838,10 +1842,10 @@ target="_top">r235084</a>]</p>
 <p>The <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=ifconfig&sektion=8&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">ifconfig</span>(8)</span></a> now
-supports &#09;<code class="varname">state</code> option for <a
+supports a &#09;<code class="option">state</code> option for <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=carp&sektion=4&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">carp</span>(4)</span></a> protocol
-to &#09;set the state of a carp cluster. The valid keywords are &#09;<tt
+to &#09;set the state of a carp cluster. Valid state keywords are &#09;<tt
 class="literal">master</tt> and &#09;<tt class="literal">backup</tt>.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=243466"
 target="_top">r243466</a>]</p>
@@ -1880,7 +1884,7 @@ target="_top">r237790</a>]</p>
 <p>The <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=lastcomm&sektion=1&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">lastcomm</span>(1)</span></a>
-utility now &#09;supports <code class="option">+<tt
+utility now &#09;supports a <code class="option">+<tt
 class="replaceable"><i>format</i></tt></code> &#09;option to specify <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=strftime&sektion=3&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">strftime</span>(3)</span></a>
@@ -1895,13 +1899,13 @@ target="_top">r237739</a>]</p>
 
 <p>The <b class="application">libpmc</b> &#09;library has been updated to support more
 PMCs (Performance &#09;Monitoring Counters) in Intel Core i7 and Xeon 5500 family
-&#09;based on Intel documentatino as of October 2011. &#09;Specifically, <tt
+&#09;based on Intel documentation as of October 2011. &#09;Specifically, <tt
 class="literal">DTLB_MISSES.PDE_MISS</tt> and &#09;<tt
 class="literal">DTLB_MISSES.LARGE_WALK_COMPLETED</tt> have been &#09;added.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=234045"
 target="_top">r234045</a>]</p>
 
-<p>The <b class="application">libradius</b> &#09;now supports <a
+<p>The <b class="application">libradius</b> &#09;now supports the <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=rad_bind_to&sektion=3&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">rad_bind_to</span>(3)</span></a>
 function.[<a href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=234555"
@@ -1910,7 +1914,7 @@ target="_top">r234555</a>]</p>
 <p>The <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=libusb&sektion=3&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">libusb</span>(3)</span></a>
-library now supports &#09;<a
+library now supports &#09;a <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=libusb_get_max_iso_packet_size&sektion=3&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span
 class="refentrytitle">libusb_get_max_iso_packet_size</span>(3)</span></a> function.[<a
@@ -1941,15 +1945,15 @@ target="_top">r241368</a>]</p>
 <p>The <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=mktemp&sektion=1&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">mktemp</span>(1)</span></a>
-utility now uses &#09;<tt class="filename">tmp</tt> as the default prefix when no
-&#09;<code class="option">-t</code> is specified.[<a
+utility now uses &#09;<tt class="filename">tmp</tt> as the default prefix when &#09;<code
+class="option">-t</code> is not specified.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=241422"
 target="_top">r241422</a>]</p>
 
 <p>The <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=mv&sektion=1&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE"><span
  class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">mv</span>(1)</span></a> utility now
-supports &#09;<code class="option">-h</code> flag. This forces it to treat a symbolic
+supports a &#09;<code class="option">-h</code> flag. This forces it to treat a symbolic
 &#09;link to a directory for the target as a symbolic instead of a &#09;directory.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=241321"
 target="_top">r241321</a>]</p>
@@ -1986,7 +1990,7 @@ Reporting &#09;(AER).[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=237732"
 target="_top">r237732</a>]</p>
 
-<p>A workaround has been implemented in &#09;<a
+<p>A workaround has been implemented in &#09;the <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=ppp&sektion=8&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">ppp</span>(8)</span></a> daemon to
 support some 3G modems which return a &#09;wrong signature in echo packets and make it
@@ -2103,7 +2107,7 @@ target="_top">r241969</a>]</p>
 <p>The <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=syslogd&sektion=8&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">syslogd</span>(8)</span></a>
-daemon now supports &#09;IPv6 address as destination address in &#09;<a
+daemon now supports &#09;IPv6 destination address in &#09;<a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=syslog.conf&sektion=5&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span
 class="refentrytitle">syslog.conf</span>(5)</span></a>.[<a
@@ -2120,7 +2124,7 @@ target="_top">r243684</a>]</p>
 <p>The <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=tcpdrop&sektion=8&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">tcpdrop</span>(8)</span></a>
-utility now accepts &#09;the address and ports to be separated by a colon or period
+utility now allows &#09;addresses and ports to be separated by a colon or period
 &#09;rather than a space to permit directly pasting the output of &#09;commands such as
 netstat and sockstat on the command &#09;line.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=247563"
@@ -2158,23 +2162,22 @@ target="_top">r235015</a>]</p>
 <p>The <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=usbhidctl&sektion=1&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">usbhidctl</span>(1)</span></a>
-utility now &#09;supports <code class="option">-z</code> flag for reading operation. It
+utility now &#09;supports a <code class="option">-z</code> flag for reading operation. It
 &#09;allows to not request current values from the device, but only &#09;receive
 changes.[<a href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=235881"
 target="_top">r235881</a>]</p>
 
-<p>The <a
+<p>Performance of the <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=zfs&sektion=8&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">;
-<span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">zfs</span>(8)</span></a> <tt
-class="command">list -t &#09; snapshot</tt> command has been improved dramatically in
-&#09;performance.[<a
+<span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">zfs</span>(8)</span></a> &#09;<tt
+class="command">list -t snapshot</tt> command has been &#09;dramatically improved.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=233862"
 target="_top">r233862</a>]</p>
 
 <p>The <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=zfs&sektion=8&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">zfs</span>(8)</span></a> <tt
-class="command">get</tt> &#09;command now supports <code class="option">-t &#09;<tt
+class="command">get</tt> &#09;command now supports a <code class="option">-t &#09;<tt
 class="replaceable"><i>datatype</i></tt></code> option.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=233862"
 target="_top">r233862</a>]</p>
@@ -2183,7 +2186,7 @@ target="_top">r233862</a>]</p>
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=zfs&sektion=8&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">zfs</span>(8)</span></a> <tt
 class="command">jail</tt> &#09;and <tt class="command">unjail</tt> commands now support
-&#09;<tt class="literal">jailnames</tt> and &#09;<tt class="literal">jailid</tt>.[<a
+&#09;a jail name as well as a jail ID.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=246750"
 target="_top">r246750</a>]</p>
 
@@ -2198,8 +2201,8 @@ target="_top">r235952</a>]</p>
 <p>Changing <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=zfs&sektion=8&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">zfs</span>(8)</span></a> &#09;<tt
-class="literal">canmount</tt> property to <tt class="literal">on</tt> &#09;when dataset
-is already mounted does not cause remount of the &#09;ZFS dataset now.[<a
+class="literal">canmount</tt> property to <tt class="literal">on</tt> &#09;no longer
+causes remount of the &#09;ZFS dataset when a dataset is already mounted.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=237457"
 target="_top">r237457</a>]</p>
 
@@ -2215,7 +2218,7 @@ output and could prevent redirection fro
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=232549"
 target="_top">r232549</a>]</p>
 
-<p>The <tt class="filename">rc.d/jail</tt> &#09; script now supports <code
+<p>The <tt class="filename">rc.d/jail</tt> &#09; script now supports a <code
 class="varname">jail_parameters</code> &#09; variable to specify extra parameters for
 each jail.[<a href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=242083"
 target="_top">r242083</a>]</p>
@@ -2223,8 +2226,8 @@ target="_top">r242083</a>]</p>
 <p>The <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=service&sektion=8&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">service</span>(8)</span></a>
-utility now &#09; supports <code class="option">-R</code> flag to restart all third party
-&#09; services in <tt class="filename">/usr/local/etc/rc.d</tt>.[<a
+utility now &#09; supports an <code class="option">-R</code> flag to restart all third
+party &#09; services in <tt class="filename">/usr/local/etc/rc.d</tt>.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=246609"
 target="_top">r246609</a>]</p>
 </div>
@@ -2304,7 +2307,7 @@ target="_top">r239563</a>]</p>
 <p>The <a
 href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=pkg_add&sektion=1&manpath=FreeBSD+8.4-RELEASE">;
 <span class="citerefentry"><span class="refentrytitle">pkg_add</span>(1)</span></a>
-utility now suports &#09;<code class="varname">PACKAGESUFFIX</code> to specify extension
+utility now supports &#09;<code class="varname">PACKAGESUFFIX</code> to specify extension
 in a &#09;package filename.[<a
 href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&revision=240674"
 target="_top">r240674</a>]</p>



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