Date: Thu, 28 Aug 2025 17:07:34 GMT From: Benedict Reuschling <bcr@FreeBSD.org> To: doc-committers@FreeBSD.org, dev-commits-doc-all@FreeBSD.org Subject: git: 6bac0268b5 - main - Avoid the use of "you" in the Multimedia chapter Message-ID: <202508281707.57SH7YDh002641@gitrepo.freebsd.org>
next in thread | raw e-mail | index | archive | help
The branch main has been updated by bcr: URL: https://cgit.FreeBSD.org/doc/commit/?id=6bac0268b5b3e9a55da774660644ad63a468da38 commit 6bac0268b5b3e9a55da774660644ad63a468da38 Author: Benedict Reuschling <bcr@FreeBSD.org> AuthorDate: 2025-08-28 15:24:25 +0000 Commit: Benedict Reuschling <bcr@FreeBSD.org> CommitDate: 2025-08-28 17:07:18 +0000 Avoid the use of "you" in the Multimedia chapter Rewrite sentences that contain 'you', which should be avoided according to the FDP Primer. The resulting sentences are easier to understand and often shorter. I did not change programlistings and other output as these are from programs, which need to be changed first (out of scope of this change). Event: Oslo Hackathon 2025 Reviewed by: carlavilla Differential Revision: https://reviews.freebsd.org/D52212 --- documentation/content/en/books/handbook/multimedia/_index.adoc | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/documentation/content/en/books/handbook/multimedia/_index.adoc b/documentation/content/en/books/handbook/multimedia/_index.adoc index 17cb077290..0950c9d5c1 100644 --- a/documentation/content/en/books/handbook/multimedia/_index.adoc +++ b/documentation/content/en/books/handbook/multimedia/_index.adoc @@ -57,7 +57,7 @@ Multimedia applications and technologies have become an integral part of modern This chapter covers various multimedia components such as audio, video, and image processing. It also discusses various media formats and codecs, as well as tools and applications for multimedia creation and playback. Additionally, the chapter covers multimedia system configuration, troubleshooting, and optimization. -Whether you are a multimedia enthusiast or a professional content creator, FreeBSD offers a robust platform for multimedia work. +FreeBSD provides a robust platform for multimedia work, suitable for both multimedia enthusiasts and professional content creators. This chapter aims to help get the most out of FreeBSD's multimedia capabilities, providing useful information and practical examples to help get started. [[sound-setup]] @@ -343,7 +343,7 @@ To install GNOME Music, execute: === Audacious Audacious is an open source audio player. -A descendant of XMMS, it plays your music how you want it, without stealing away your computer's resources from other tasks. +As a descendant of XMMS, it provides music playback while maintaining efficient use of system resources. To install Audacious, execute:
Want to link to this message? Use this URL: <https://mail-archive.FreeBSD.org/cgi/mid.cgi?202508281707.57SH7YDh002641>