Date: Thu, 25 Nov 2004 09:36:47 -0800 From: David Armour <dfarmour@myrealbox.com> To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Subject: Re: three tiny typos ... possibly Message-ID: <200411250936.47551.dfarmour@myrealbox.com> In-Reply-To: <20041125120046.4621316A4D2@hub.freebsd.org> References: <20041125120046.4621316A4D2@hub.freebsd.org>
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6. [RFC] Kerberos5 chapter re-write (Tillman Hodgson) > From: Tillman Hodgson <tillman@seekingfire.com> > Subject: [RFC] Kerberos5 chapter re-write > I have an HTML-rendered version of it up at > http://www.seekingfire.com/freebsd-doc/kerberos5.html > I'm looking for peer review and technical feedback :-) no way do i qualify, and i'm *not* able to provide 'technical' feedback. :c) i was merely planning to have a look at the handbook entry anyway... your link gave me an excuse. > HTML link above will attest. This was actually a great way to > find typos in SGML tags ;-) for what it's worth, the planned changes seem positive, to my newbie eyes. of course, the quoted lines may not survive the planned changes, and the 'typos' may not even be typos... i hope you can use this. Section: 14.8 Paragraph: 3 Line: 5 ... Section 23.4 and services with support comprehensive ... ^^^ ?? s/b "which" ? or "with support OF..."? Section: 14.8.1.2.3 Configuring the initial Kerberos database Paragraph: 5 Line: 2 ... should be able to confirm the that the ... ^^^ delete ? transposed "the" ? Section: 14.8.2.1 Troubleshooting procedure Paragraph: 4 Line: 1 ... sniffer on your KDC to add in troubleshooting ... ^^^ s/b "aid" ? ==================================== > "Laughter is the sound that knowledge makes when it's born." > -- David Weinberger, _The Hyperlinked Organization_ nice tag. thanks.
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