Date: Tue, 12 Apr 2005 20:38:20 +0200 From: "Simon L. Nielsen" <simon@nitro.dk> To: Mark Linimon <linimon@lonesome.com> Cc: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: CFD: additions to the PR submission article Message-ID: <20050412183820.GD837@zaphod.nitro.dk> In-Reply-To: <Pine.LNX.4.44.0504110437400.2500-100000@pancho> References: <20050411092513.GB71160@eddie.nitro.dk> <Pine.LNX.4.44.0504110437400.2500-100000@pancho>
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[-- Attachment #1 --] On 2005.04.11 04:40:42 -0500, Mark Linimon wrote: > On Mon, 11 Apr 2005, Simon L. Nielsen wrote: > > > > + </listitem> > > > + > > > > No need for an empty line here. > > Hmm, then the style is wrong elsewhere in the article. That sounds likely. It's not very important, I just notice things like that when I read a patch :-). > > > + <para>Then you should ascertain whether or not the problem is > > > + timely. There are few things > > > > This line could be made longer. > > Weak attempt at a diff reduction on the next line. OTOH since I > moved the block that that line was in to make the emphasis clearer, > it may not make any difference. When the text is moved I don't think it it helps much to preserve old lines, but I don't know if it makes a difference for translators. > > > + <ulink url="http://www.freebsd.org/security/">list of supported > > > > s/freebsd.org/FreeBSD.org/ > > Also wrong elsewhere IIRC. > > I can make these suggested changes when I commit, and then go back and > fix the other ones in a separate checkin to make them consistent. That would be great! -- Simon L. Nielsen [-- Attachment #2 --] -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- Version: GnuPG v1.4.0 (FreeBSD) iD8DBQFCXBWbh9pcDSc1mlERAqrIAJ4igj/E3zXSyLY+1daHPH37L+W76gCcClbH YB2vfSNY54eJJaWPW/K5I5o= =AVYZ -----END PGP SIGNATURE-----home | help
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