Date: Tue, 11 May 2004 22:01:49 +0300 (EEST) From: Giorgos Keramidas <keramida@ceid.upatras.gr> To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org Subject: docs/66544: minor typo in dialup-firewall article. Message-ID: <200405111901.i4BJ1nGe025180@gothmog.gr> Resent-Message-ID: <200405111910.i4BJAHxE000977@freefall.freebsd.org>
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>Number: 66544
>Category: docs
>Synopsis: minor typo in dialup-firewall article.
>Confidential: no
>Severity: non-critical
>Priority: low
>Responsible: freebsd-doc
>State: open
>Quarter:
>Keywords:
>Date-Required:
>Class: doc-bug
>Submitter-Id: current-users
>Arrival-Date: Tue May 11 12:10:17 PDT 2004
>Closed-Date:
>Last-Modified:
>Originator: Giorgos Keramidas
>Release: FreeBSD 5.2-CURRENT i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD gothmog.gr 5.2-CURRENT FreeBSD 5.2-CURRENT #12: Tue May 11
05:46:24 EEST 2004 sysop@gothmog.gr:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/CELERON i386
>Description:
While updating my local translation of the dialup-firewall article in
Greek, I noticed that the word 'safely' appears twice in the English
version. See attached patch...
One other minor correction we might want to make is s/anyway/any way/
two lines below the line affected by this patch. I'm not sure if it's
really necessary, so I left this second change out, but my intuition
says that "any way" is slightly better.
>How-To-Repeat:
>Fix:
--- patchfile begins here ---
Index: article.sgml
===================================================================
RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/dialup-firewall/article.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.35
diff -u -r1.35 article.sgml
--- article.sgml 10 May 2004 09:55:56 -0000 1.35
+++ article.sgml 11 May 2004 18:57:19 -0000
@@ -226,7 +226,7 @@
<para>You now have a fully functional firewall that only allows
connections to ports 22 and 80 and will log any other connection
- attempts. You may now safely safely reboot and the firewall should
+ attempts. You may now safely reboot and the firewall should
be automatically started and the ruleset loaded. If you find this
incorrect in anyway or experience any problems, or have any
suggestions to improve this page, please email me.</para>
--- patchfile ends here ---
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