Date: Thu, 21 Mar 2002 10:05:31 -0800 (PST) From: Michael Lucas <mwlucas@FreeBSD.org> To: cvs-committers@FreeBSD.org, cvs-all@FreeBSD.org Subject: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge chapter.sgml Message-ID: <200203211805.g2LI5VD93659@freefall.freebsd.org>
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mwlucas 2002/03/21 10:05:31 PST
Modified files:
en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge chapter.sgml
Log:
Start cleaning up the stable/current section.
a) literally stop literally repeating certain words literally every
sentence. Generally, this isn't generally useful and generally
becomes generally annoying very quickly, generally.
b) add specific examples of why -current is not what it isn't.
c) make it explicit that users of -current should be able to debug
many problems on their own.
d) smooth & tighten the language after the above changes.
Revision Changes Path
1.110 +38 -29 doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.sgml
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