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Date:      Thu, 24 Jul 2014 20:51:38 +0000 (UTC)
From:      Gavin Atkinson <gavin@FreeBSD.org>
To:        doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org
Subject:   svn commit: r45371 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking
Message-ID:  <201407242051.s6OKpcgq073126@svn.freebsd.org>

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Author: gavin
Date: Thu Jul 24 20:51:38 2014
New Revision: 45371
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/45371

Log:
  Fix a couple of unrelated issues in the Wi-Fi section:
   - Wi-Fi Alliance needs a capital "A"
   - Change the word "security" to "network" in a paragraph talking about
     diagnosing connectivity issues.  I suspect this is a copy/paste error.
     This paragraph also needs to be moved, I shall do that in a separate
     commit.

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.xml	Thu Jul 24 20:12:15 2014	(r45370)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.xml	Thu Jul 24 20:51:38 2014	(r45371)
@@ -1365,7 +1365,7 @@ wlan0: flags=8843&lt;UP,BROADCAST,RUNNIN
 	      first <acronym>EAP</acronym> method to be certified
 	      by the <link
 		xlink:href="http://www.wi-fi.org/">Wi-Fi
-		alliance</link>.  <acronym>EAP-TLS</acronym> requires
+		Alliance</link>.  <acronym>EAP-TLS</acronym> requires
 	      three certificates to run: the certificate of the
 	      Certificate Authority (<acronym>CA</acronym>) installed
 	      on all machines, the server certificate for the
@@ -2195,7 +2195,7 @@ freebsdap       00:11:95:c3:0d:ac    1  
 
 	<listitem>
 	  <para>Once the system can associate with the access point,
-	    diagnose the security configuration using tools like
+	    diagnose the network configuration using tools like
 	    &man.ping.8;.</para>
 
 	  <para>Debugging support is provided by



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