Date: Mon, 27 Dec 2004 18:25:59 +0100 From: Remko Lodder <remko@elvandar.org> To: Matteo Riondato <rionda@gufi.org> Cc: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Subject: Re: Firewall chapter paragraph explanation Message-ID: <41D045A7.2060803@elvandar.org> In-Reply-To: <1104162949.57869.9.camel@kaiser.sig11.org> References: <1104162949.57869.9.camel@kaiser.sig11.org>
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Matteo Riondato wrote:
> Hi folks!
> I'm translating the Firewall chapter of the Handbook in Italian (and
> while doing this, I'm also trying to clarify a bit the English version,
> as pointed out in PR docs/75422).
> I find real difficulties in understanding and translating lines
> 1022-1024 of chapter.sgml :
> <title>STATEFUL</title>
> <para><literal>keep state</literal> indicates that on a pass rule, any
> packets that match the rules selection parameters is to activate the
> stateful filtering facility.</para>
>
> I think it means:
> "keep state" means that the stateful filtering facility must be
> activated for any packet that matches the rule selection parameters of a
> pass rule."
>
>
> Am I wrong? Is the chapter paragraph syntactically and grammatically
> correct?
>
> Best Regards
Hi Matteo,
The chapter is not syntactically and gramatically alright. We
are working on that (Simon is, and i am trying to help :)).
I think your explaination is more clear then the current
one :-).
Cheers:)
--
Kind regards,
Remko Lodder ** remko@elvandar.org
Reporter DSINET ** remko@DSINet.org
Founder Tienervaders ** remko@tienervaders.org
FreeBSD Documentation Project ** remko@FreeBSD.org
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