Date: Wed, 15 Dec 2004 22:26:09 +0100 From: "Joel Dahl" <joel@automatvapen.se> To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org Subject: docs/75131: [patch] arch-handbook: chapter 16: Minor corrections Message-ID: <20041215212541.A242937E44@smtp4-2-sn2.hy.skanova.net> Resent-Message-ID: <200412152130.iBFLUKew075662@freefall.freebsd.org>
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>Number: 75131
>Category: docs
>Synopsis: [patch] arch-handbook: chapter 16: Minor corrections
>Confidential: no
>Severity: non-critical
>Priority: low
>Responsible: freebsd-doc
>State: open
>Quarter:
>Keywords:
>Date-Required:
>Class: doc-bug
>Submitter-Id: current-users
>Arrival-Date: Wed Dec 15 21:30:20 GMT 2004
>Closed-Date:
>Last-Modified:
>Originator: Joel Dahl
>Release: FreeBSD 5.3-STABLE i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD dude.automatvapen.se 5.3-STABLE FreeBSD 5.3-STABLE #1: Sat Nov 13 19:50:36 CET 2004 joel@dude.automatvapen.se:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/WRK i386
>Description:
- Correct name (Justin T. Gibbs)
- Correct spelling
>How-To-Repeat:
>Fix:
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Index: chapter.sgml
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RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/arch-handbook/scsi/chapter.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.14
diff -u -r1.14 chapter.sgml
--- chapter.sgml 11 Aug 2004 17:25:04 -0000 1.14
+++ chapter.sgml 15 Dec 2004 21:17:09 -0000
@@ -33,10 +33,10 @@
</itemizedlist>
- <para>and from the CAM code itself (by Justing T. Gibbs, see
+ <para>and from the CAM code itself (by Justin T. Gibbs, see
<filename>/sys/cam/*</filename>). When some solution looked the
most logical and was essentially verbatim extracted from the code
- by Justin Gibbs, I marked it as <quote>recommended</quote>.</para>
+ by Justin T. Gibbs, I marked it as <quote>recommended</quote>.</para>
<para>The document is illustrated with examples in
pseudo-code. Although sometimes the examples have many details
@@ -587,7 +587,7 @@
<para>Then allocate whatever data structures (such as
card-dependent hardware control block) we need to process this
- request. If we ca not then freeze the SIM queue and remember
+ request. If we can not then freeze the SIM queue and remember
that we have a pending operation, return the CCB back and ask
CAM to re-queue it. Later when the resources become available
the SIM queue must be unfrozen by returning a ccb with the
--- archfix.diff ends here ---
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