Date: Fri, 9 Mar 2007 13:54:10 +0000 (UTC) From: Giorgos Keramidas <keramida@FreeBSD.org> To: doc-committers@FreeBSD.org, cvs-doc@FreeBSD.org, cvs-all@FreeBSD.org Subject: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ppp-and-slip chapter.sgml Message-ID: <200703091354.l29DsAHk049431@repoman.freebsd.org>
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keramida 2007-03-09 13:54:10 UTC
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Modified files:
en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ppp-and-slip chapter.sgml
Log:
Tweak a bit the text, to make it easier to read. "It is worth
your while ensuring" may be confusing to some non-native English
readers. "It is a good idea to ensure" means the same and it
carries less potential for confusion.
Revision Changes Path
1.176 +1 -1 doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ppp-and-slip/chapter.sgml
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