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Date:      Fri, 15 Jul 2011 05:57:09 +0000 (UTC)
From:      Hiroki Sato <hrs@FreeBSD.org>
To:        src-committers@freebsd.org, svn-src-user@freebsd.org
Subject:   svn commit: r224054 - user/hrs/ipv6/usr.sbin/rtadvctl
Message-ID:  <201107150557.p6F5v9dM063062@svn.freebsd.org>

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Author: hrs
Date: Fri Jul 15 05:57:09 2011
New Revision: 224054
URL: http://svn.freebsd.org/changeset/base/224054

Log:
  - Fix grammatical errors.
  - Add AUTHOURS section.
  
  Suggested by:	Benjamin Kaduk

Modified:
  user/hrs/ipv6/usr.sbin/rtadvctl/rtadvctl.8

Modified: user/hrs/ipv6/usr.sbin/rtadvctl/rtadvctl.8
==============================================================================
--- user/hrs/ipv6/usr.sbin/rtadvctl/rtadvctl.8	Fri Jul 15 04:49:30 2011	(r224053)
+++ user/hrs/ipv6/usr.sbin/rtadvctl/rtadvctl.8	Fri Jul 15 05:57:09 2011	(r224054)
@@ -39,36 +39,37 @@
 .Op Ar interface ...
 .Sh DESCRIPTION
 .Nm
-is a utility that communicates
+is a utility that communicates with
 .Xr rtadvd 8
-daemon and displays information on Router Advertisement messages being
-sent on each interfaces.
+daemon and displays information about Router Advertisement messages being
+sent on each interface.
 .Pp
 This utility provides several options and subcommands.
 The options are as follows:
 .Bl -tag -width indent
 .\"
 .It Fl v
-Increase verbose level.  When specified once, the
+Increase verbosity level.
+When specified once, the
 .Nm
-utility shows additional information on prefixes, RDNSS, and DNSSL
+utility shows additional information about prefixes, RDNSS, and DNSSL
 options.
-When twice, it shows information on inactive interfaces and
-some statistics.
+When given twice, it additionally shows information about
+inactive interfaces and some statistics.
 .El
 .Pp
 The subcommands are as follows:
 .Bl -tag -width indent
 .\"
 .It reload
-Specifies reloading the configuration file.
+Specifies to reload the configuration file.
 .It shutdown
-Makes
+Makes the
 .Xr rtadvd 8
 daemon shut down immediately.
 .It show Op interfaces...
 Displays information on Router Advertisement messages being sent
-on each interfaces.
+on each interface.
 .Sh SEE ALSO
 .Xr rtadv 8 ,
 .Xr rtadvd.conf 5
@@ -77,6 +78,10 @@ The
 .Nm
 command first appeared in
 .Fx 9.0 .
+.Sh AUTHORS
+.Nm
+was written by
+.An "Hiroki Sato" Aq hrs@FreeBSD.org .
 .Sh BUGS
 The
 .Xr rtadvd 8
@@ -87,6 +92,6 @@ subcommand.
 This is because in the current implementation it cannot communicate
 with
 .Nm
-during sending some additional RAs for graceful transition from one
+while sending some additional RAs for graceful transition from one
 configuration to another.
 It will take at most nine seconds for each interface.



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