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Date:      Wed, 21 May 2003 10:25:44 -0400
From:      Tom Rhodes <trhodes@FreeBSD.org>
To:        Murray Stokely <murray@FreeBSD.org>
Cc:        cvs-all@FreeBSD.org
Subject:   Re: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports chapter.sgml
Message-ID:  <20030521102544.28331639.trhodes@FreeBSD.org>
In-Reply-To: <20030520225417.X8403@freebsdmall.com>
References:  <200305202012.h4KKCnLI043890@repoman.freebsd.org> <20030520225417.X8403@freebsdmall.com>

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On Tue, 20 May 2003 22:54:17 -0700
Murray Stokely <murray@FreeBSD.org> wrote:

> On Tue, May 20, 2003 at 01:12:49PM -0700, Tom Rhodes wrote:
> >   Fix a screen tag in another part of the chapter.
> 
> Why is this a fix?  You inserted a huge gap between two closely
> related commands.  You cd into a directory, then you run the make
> command specified.  The two lines should be in one <screen>.
> 
> 	 - Murray
> 
> Like this :
>  
> -	<screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>cd
>          /usr/ports/<replaceable>directory</replaceable></userinput></screen>
> -	 <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>make MASTER_SITE_OVERRIDE= \
> +	 <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>cd
>          /usr/ports/<replaceable>directory</replaceable></userinput>
> +&prompt.root; <userinput>make MASTER_SITE_OVERRIDE= \
> 	       ftp://ftp.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/ports/distfiles/
>          fetch</userinput></screen>
> 
> 

The output looked horrible on my built version.  The original version
wrapped it in one <screen> tag, and I hoped to make it look a little
better.  Sorry.

--
Tom Rhodes



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