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Date:      Thu, 24 Dec 2015 20:15:14 +0000 (UTC)
From:      Christian Brueffer <brueffer@FreeBSD.org>
To:        src-committers@freebsd.org, svn-src-all@freebsd.org, svn-src-stable@freebsd.org, svn-src-stable-10@freebsd.org
Subject:   svn commit: r292707 - in stable/10: contrib/smbfs tools/debugscripts
Message-ID:  <201512242015.tBOKFEUj091507@repo.freebsd.org>

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Author: brueffer
Date: Thu Dec 24 20:15:14 2015
New Revision: 292707
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/base/292707

Log:
  MFH: r292263
  
  Assorted grammar, spelling and punctuation fixes.
  
  PR:		203336, 203339
  Submitted by:	espeyb@rpi.edu, themesta@gmail.com

Modified:
  stable/10/contrib/smbfs/README
  stable/10/tools/debugscripts/README
Directory Properties:
  stable/10/   (props changed)

Modified: stable/10/contrib/smbfs/README
==============================================================================
--- stable/10/contrib/smbfs/README	Thu Dec 24 19:09:48 2015	(r292706)
+++ stable/10/contrib/smbfs/README	Thu Dec 24 20:15:14 2015	(r292707)
@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ It is a complete, kernel side implementa
 
 	Darwin			maintained in the Darwin's  tree.
 
-    I'm would be very grateful for any feedback, bug reports etc.
+    I would be very grateful for any feedback, bug reports etc.
 
     Supported SMB servers:
 	Samba
@@ -23,14 +23,14 @@ It is a complete, kernel side implementa
 	IBM LanManager
 	NetApp
 
-    An updated versions of this package can be retrieved from ftp server:
+    An updated version of this package can be retrieved from ftp server:
 
     ftp://ftp.butya.kz/pub/smbfs/smbfs.tar.gz
 
-    Perfomance
+    Performance
     ==========
     
-    There is some perfomance benchmarks over 10Mbit network:
+    These are some performance benchmarks over a 10Mbit network:
     
     Win95 machine as server:
 IOZONE: auto-test mode

Modified: stable/10/tools/debugscripts/README
==============================================================================
--- stable/10/tools/debugscripts/README	Thu Dec 24 19:09:48 2015	(r292706)
+++ stable/10/tools/debugscripts/README	Thu Dec 24 20:15:14 2015	(r292707)
@@ -14,8 +14,8 @@ perform kernel debugging, you would do:
   (kgdb) 
 
 
-This directory also contains a kgdb script that given a crash dump number
-automatically extract the path to the kernel source, run gdb to extract
-information about kernel modules loaded, and then rerun gdb loading the
+This directory also contains a kgdb script that, given a crash dump number,
+automatically extracts the path to the kernel source, runs gdb to extract
+information about kernel modules loaded, and then reruns gdb loading the
 necessary symbols for the modules.  You need to make sure you build the
 modules w/ debugging symbols separately to get things to work.



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