Date: Sat, 4 Aug 2001 12:32:10 -0700 (PDT) From: Jim Mock <jim@FreeBSD.org> To: cvs-committers@FreeBSD.org, cvs-all@FreeBSD.org Subject: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook book.sgml Message-ID: <200108041932.f74JWAi72758@freefall.freebsd.org>
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jim 2001/08/04 12:32:10 PDT
Modified files:
en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook book.sgml
Log:
Add periods to the ends of the sentences in the list in the
introduction. While I'm at it, change "dipped in to" to "read" in the
system administration intro. Also reword the first sentence to read a
little better.
Revision Changes Path
1.110 +8 -8 doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/book.sgml
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