Date: Sun, 9 Oct 2011 01:21:53 +0000 (UTC) From: Warren Block <wblock@FreeBSD.org> To: doc-committers@FreeBSD.org, cvs-doc@FreeBSD.org, cvs-all@FreeBSD.org Subject: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall chapter.sgml Message-ID: <201110090121.p991LrGl070116@repoman.freebsd.org>
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wblock 2011-10-09 01:21:53 UTC
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Modified files:
en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall chapter.sgml
Log:
Various fixes:
"effective at improving performance" is correct in English.
"issues with the installation" is vague, reworded.
Expand/clarify BIOS boot menu information.
Spelling/grammar.
Simplify Introducing bsdinstall.
Expand/clarify mirror site description choice.
Attempt to remove unnecessary instances of "the" and "you".
"Booting" is used in this doc more than "restarting".
Add link to network information.
Revision Changes Path
1.2 +44 -41 doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.sgml
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