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Date:      Fri, 24 Nov 2023 17:59:40 +0000
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Subject:   [Bug 273358] FreeBSD Handbook: stable/11 and stable/12 described as legacy branches
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Minsoo Choo <minsoochoo0122@proton.me> changed:

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--- Comment #3 from Minsoo Choo <minsoochoo0122@proton.me> ---
(In reply to Graham Perrin from comment #2)
<https://docs.freebsd.org/en/books/fdp-primer/writing-style/#writing-style-=
be-clear>

"Write in a formal style. Avoid addressing the reader as "you". For example,
say "copy the file to /tmp" rather than "you can copy the file to /tmp"."

So "You may prefer to use" should be avoided

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