Date: Sun, 3 Aug 2003 15:28:52 -0700 (PDT) From: Murray Stokely <murray@FreeBSD.org> To: doc-committers@FreeBSD.org, cvs-doc@FreeBSD.org, cvs-all@FreeBSD.org Subject: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/multimedia chapter.sgml Message-ID: <200308032228.h73MSqPZ046433@repoman.freebsd.org>
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murray 2003/08/03 15:28:52 PDT
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Modified files:
en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/multimedia chapter.sgml
Log:
* Remove/reword first person sentences.
* Acknowledge Windows Media Player and Apple QuickTime trademarks on
first use.
* Remove several ridiculous sentences ("Most of the above is true.")
* Other grammar fixes.
Sponsored by: FreeBSD Mall, Inc.
Revision Changes Path
1.54 +37 -36 doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/multimedia/chapter.sgml
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