Date: Fri, 30 Jul 2004 10:09:23 +0300 From: Giorgos Keramidas <keramida@ceid.upatras.gr> To: Marc Fonvieille <marc@blackend.org> Cc: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Subject: Re: A problem in Handbook's Common Tasks part Message-ID: <20040730070923.GB75591@orion.daedalusnetworks.priv> In-Reply-To: <20040730062018.GB21106@abigail.blackend.org> References: <20040730062018.GB21106@abigail.blackend.org>
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On 2004-07-30 08:20, Marc Fonvieille <marc@blackend.org> wrote: > > I found something "annoying" in the introduction of the Common Tasks > part, I read: > > "Describe the X Window System in more detail, and introduce you to > modern desktop environments such as GNOME and KDE." > > The X Window System, GNOME and KDE are described in X11 chapter of > the previous part "Getting Started". Since this sentence seems refering > to the desktop chapter, I'd see something like: > > "Introduce you to popular and usesul desktop applications: browsers, > productivity tools, document viewers, etc." Yep, this one seems much better. Good catch! :-)
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