Date: Fri, 19 Feb 2016 21:57:38 +0000 (UTC) From: Jason Helfman <jgh@FreeBSD.org> To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r48213 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/special Message-ID: <201602192157.u1JLvcpS051474@repo.freebsd.org>
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Author: jgh Date: Fri Feb 19 21:57:38 2016 New Revision: 48213 URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/48213 Log: - address grammar PR: 207353 Submitted by: waclas@rpi.edu Approved by: bcr (mentor) Differential Revision: https://reviews.freebsd.org/D5357 Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/special/chapter.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/special/chapter.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/special/chapter.xml Fri Feb 19 21:55:52 2016 (r48212) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/special/chapter.xml Fri Feb 19 21:57:38 2016 (r48213) @@ -5396,7 +5396,7 @@ run_rc_command "$1"</programlisting> <step> <para>Make sure there is no <literal>KEYWORD: &os;</literal> present. This has - not been necessary or desirable for years. It is also + not been necessary nor desirable for years. It is also an indication that the new script was copy/pasted from an old script, so extra caution must be given to the review.</para>
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