Date: Mon, 10 Mar 2008 12:45:05 -0300 From: Jean Milanez Melo <jmelo@freebsdbrasil.com.br> To: Giorgos Keramidas <keramida@freebsd.org> Cc: freebsd-small@freebsd.org, freebsd-embedded@freebsd.org Subject: Re: TinyBSD article for the doc/ tree [was: Re: tinybsd qemu small howto] Message-ID: <47D55781.4050308@freebsdbrasil.com.br> In-Reply-To: <20080309235108.GA29312@kobe.laptop> References: <1194819232.1047.19.camel@workstation.martenvijn.nl> <20071115013208.GA3497@kobe.laptop> <1195151049.3240.10.camel@workstation.martenvijn.nl> <20071115190615.GA2775@kobe.laptop> <1195169880.3240.46.camel@workstation.martenvijn.nl> <1205006382.1390.4.camel@workstation.martenvijn.nl> <20080308202258.GB2331@kobe.laptop> <47D2FD93.5060801@freebsdbrasil.com.br> <20080309235108.GA29312@kobe.laptop>
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Giorgos Keramidas wrote: > > An SGML article, with most of the text being just an adaptation of the > tinybsd/Documentation wiki page is now online at: > > http://people.freebsd.org/~keramida/tinybsd-20080310-01/article.sgml > > A preformatted version of the article is available in the same directory. > You can read it at: > > http://people.freebsd.org/~keramida/tinybsd-20080310-01/article.html > That's great Giorgos! Thanks for your help. :) > Can you please review the article? It would be interesting to know: > > - If there are technical errors in what I wrote. My first TinyBSD > build is running as I'm typing this, so I don't really count as > an experienced TinyBSD user. There are no errors, everything is ok. > > - If there is something else you would like me to add. > The article is very objective and i think that is what we want to. Congratz! :) > - If there are parts you don't like about the text, sections that > we should rewrite, fix, and so on. No, that's ok, very good as i said, please just change only my mail address to jmelo@freebsd.org. > > There are also a few parts which I haven't completely converted yet, and > some places where I have questions about MFSROOT images and config file > changes. I'll experiment a bit with the TinyBSD image I'm building now, > but if you can help me fill in the last few sections, it would be nice :) > Oks, what are your questions about MFSROOT and config files? About the last sections i'll organize what i wrote and will send it to you by private mail. > You can see how I'm considering to organize the remaining sections by > reading the SGML comments in the `article.sgml' file. > I have a sugestion: what do you think about create a new handbook session called "embedded" and add both nanobsd and tinybsd article? i think it could be better. Cheers, -- Jean
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