Date: Fri, 9 Jul 2004 09:27:11 +0000 (UTC) From: Murray Stokely <murray@FreeBSD.org> To: doc-committers@FreeBSD.org, cvs-doc@FreeBSD.org, cvs-all@FreeBSD.org Subject: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mac chapter.sgml Message-ID: <200407090927.i699RBqp049808@repoman.freebsd.org>
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murray 2004-07-09 09:27:11 UTC
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Modified files:
en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mac chapter.sgml
Log:
* Fix grammar mistakes and redundant clauses in the first paragraph.
* Remove 'as more features are added, they will be added here'. That
goes without saying for the entire Handbook.
* Break up a list of disagreeing clauses into two separate sentences.
* Replace a colon with a semicolon.
* Remove colorful language describing some users as irrational in
favor of more succinct exposition.
Revision Changes Path
1.8 +10 -13 doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mac/chapter.sgml
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