Date: Mon, 16 Apr 2001 18:39:31 -0700 (PDT) From: Dima Dorfman <dd@FreeBSD.org> To: cvs-committers@FreeBSD.org, cvs-all@FreeBSD.org Subject: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/porters-handbook book.sgml doc/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/ppp-primer book.sgml Message-ID: <200104170139.f3H1dVi53280@freefall.freebsd.org>
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dd 2001/04/16 18:39:31 PDT
Modified files:
en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/porters-handbook book.sgml
en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/ppp-primer book.sgml
Log:
Remove references to first-person pronouns ("I", "me", etc.): all they
do is serve to confuse the reader (who is this "I"?).
Revision Changes Path
1.143 +15 -13 doc/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/porters-handbook/book.sgml
1.9 +5 -4 doc/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/ppp-primer/book.sgml
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