Date: Sat, 1 Oct 2016 13:07:05 +0000 (UTC) From: Mark Linimon <linimon@FreeBSD.org> To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r49444 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs Message-ID: <201610011307.u91D75lK003990@repo.freebsd.org>
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Author: linimon Date: Sat Oct 1 13:07:05 2016 New Revision: 49444 URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/49444 Log: Fix some awkward wording and style problems. PR: 213061 Reviewed by: allanjude Approved by: allanjude Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/where.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/where.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/where.xml Fri Sep 30 18:33:07 2016 (r49443) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/where.xml Sat Oct 1 13:07:05 2016 (r49444) @@ -21,6 +21,9 @@ <h2>Choosing an Architecture</h2> + <p>Most users of &os; will have hardware for either the amd64, + i386, or armv6 architectures.</p> + <p>Modern PCs use the amd64 architecture, including those with Intel® branded processors. Computers with more than 3 GB of memory should use amd64. If the computer is an @@ -29,6 +32,10 @@ Bone Black, Panda Board, and Zed Board, use the armv6 SD card image which supports ARMv6 and ARMv7 processors.</p> + <p>All other users should reference the + <a href="&base;/platforms/index.html">complete list</a> + of supported &os; platforms.</p> + <a name="choose-image"></a> <h2>Choosing an Image</h2> @@ -38,7 +45,7 @@ (bootonly) sized ISO Disc Images, as well as regular and mini USB memory stick images. Later versions of &os; are also offered as prebuilt - expandable Virtual Machine images, and as SD Cards for embedded + expandable Virtual Machine images, and as SD Card images for embedded platforms.</p> <a name="help-statistics"></a> @@ -329,7 +336,7 @@ <p>If you plan on getting &os; via HTTP or FTP, please check the listing of <a href="&base;/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mirrors-ftp.html"><strong>mirror - sites</strong></a> in the handbook to see if there is a site + sites</strong></a> in the Handbook to see if there is a site closer to you.</p> <a name="install"></a>
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