Date: Mon, 21 Feb 2005 05:30:18 GMT From: Remko Lodder <remko@elvandar.org> To: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: docs/77817: [PATCH] vinum chapter (handbook) fixes Message-ID: <200502210530.j1L5UIgd061442@freefall.freebsd.org>
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From: Remko Lodder <remko@elvandar.org>
To: "Jesus R. Camou" <jcamou@cox.net>
Cc: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org
Subject: Re: docs/77817: [PATCH] vinum chapter (handbook) fixes
Date: Mon, 21 Feb 2005 06:21:31 +0100
Jesus R. Camou wrote:
>>Number: 77817
>>Category: docs
>>Synopsis: [PATCH] vinum chapter (handbook) fixes
>>Confidential: no
>>Severity: non-critical
>>Priority: medium
>>Responsible: freebsd-doc
>>State: open
>>Quarter:
>>Keywords:
>>Date-Required:
>>Class: change-request
>>Submitter-Id: current-users
>>Arrival-Date: Mon Feb 21 01:10:11 GMT 2005
>>Closed-Date:
>>Last-Modified:
>>Originator: Jesus R. Camou
>>Release: FreeBSD 4.11-STABLE i386
>>Organization:
>>Environment:
>
> System: FreeBSD opensea.mephis.org 4.11-STABLE FreeBSD 4.11-STABLE #0: Sun Feb 13 21:22:53 MST 2005 jcamou@opensea.mephis.org:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/HACKED i386
>
>
>>Description:
>
>
> o Isn't Hiten Pandya's email hmp@FreeBSD.org? Change this.
> o s/4.x/4.X/ and s/5.x/5.X/
> o add white space: devicename -> device name
>
>
>>How-To-Repeat:
>
>
>>Fix:
>
>
> --- vinum.diff begins here ---
> Index: chapter.sgml
> ===================================================================
> RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/vinum/chapter.sgml,v
> retrieving revision 1.34
> diff -u -r1.34 chapter.sgml
> --- chapter.sgml 11 Jan 2005 12:34:29 -0000 1.34
> +++ chapter.sgml 21 Feb 2005 00:42:10 -0000
> @@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
> The Vinum Volume Manager
> By Greg Lehey (grog at lemis dot com)
>
> - Added to the Handbook by Hiten Pandya <hiten@FreeBSD.org>
> + Added to the Handbook by Hiten Pandya <hmp@FreeBSD.org>
> and Tom Rhodes <trhodes@FreeBSD.org>
>
> For the FreeBSD Documentation Project
> @@ -1078,8 +1078,8 @@
> start</command> command.</para>
>
> <note><para>The following paragraphs are outlining the steps
> - needed for FreeBSD 5.x and above. The setup required for
> - FreeBSD 4.x differs, and is described below in <xref
> + needed for FreeBSD 5.X and above. The setup required for
> + FreeBSD 4.X differs, and is described below in <xref
> linkend="vinum-root-4x">.</para></note>
>
> <para>By placing the line:</para>
> @@ -1096,7 +1096,7 @@
> root device in <filename>/etc/fstab</filename>, and passes
> this information on to the kernel. When it comes to mount
> the root filesystem, the kernel figures out from the
> - devicename provided which driver to ask to translate this
> + device name provided which driver to ask to translate this
> into the internal device ID (major/minor number).</para>
> </listitem>
> </itemizedlist>
> --- vinum.diff ends here ---
>
>
>
>>Release-Note:
>>Audit-Trail:
>>Unformatted:
>
You are correct about the hmp address. However the .x to .X in the
version numbering already had been done yesterday.
Could you please send a updated patch without the uppercase X diff?
Thanks!
--
Kind regards,
Remko Lodder ** remko@elvandar.org
Reporter DSINET ** remko@DSINet.org
Founder Tienervaders ** remko@tienervaders.org
FreeBSD Documentation Project ** remko@FreeBSD.org
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