Date: Thu, 18 Jul 2013 17:21:07 +0000 (UTC) From: Warren Block <wblock@FreeBSD.org> To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r42314 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/structure Message-ID: <201307181721.r6IHL7Fi003320@svn.freebsd.org>
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Author: wblock Date: Thu Jul 18 17:21:07 2013 New Revision: 42314 URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42314 Log: Reword explanation of Handbook chapters not being standalone files. Reviewed by: bjk Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/structure/chapter.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/structure/chapter.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/structure/chapter.xml Thu Jul 18 17:03:17 2013 (r42313) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/structure/chapter.xml Thu Jul 18 17:21:07 2013 (r42314) @@ -304,9 +304,9 @@ </important> <para>The <filename>chapter.xml</filename> files are not - complete <acronym>XML</acronym> documents. They cannot be - individually rendered to output formats, but must be built - as part of the Handbook.</para> + complete <acronym>XML</acronym> documents that can be + built individually. They can only be built + as parts of the whole Handbook.</para> </sect4> </sect3> </sect2>
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