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Date:      Sat, 9 Jan 2010 00:24:54 +0000 (UTC)
From:      Christian Brueffer <brueffer@FreeBSD.org>
To:        src-committers@freebsd.org, svn-src-all@freebsd.org, svn-src-head@freebsd.org
Subject:   svn commit: r201870 - head/share/man/man4
Message-ID:  <201001090024.o090OsmW037868@svn.freebsd.org>

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Author: brueffer
Date: Sat Jan  9 00:24:54 2010
New Revision: 201870
URL: http://svn.freebsd.org/changeset/base/201870

Log:
  Various language fixes.
  
  PR:		38061
  Submitted by:	Chris Pepper <pepper@rockefeller.edu>
  MFC after:	1 week

Modified:
  head/share/man/man4/faith.4

Modified: head/share/man/man4/faith.4
==============================================================================
--- head/share/man/man4/faith.4	Sat Jan  9 00:20:33 2010	(r201869)
+++ head/share/man/man4/faith.4	Sat Jan  9 00:24:54 2010	(r201870)
@@ -58,15 +58,15 @@ variable in
 .Xr rc.conf 5 .
 .Pp
 Special action will be taken when IPv6 TCP traffic is seen on a router,
-and routing table suggests to route it to
+and the routing table suggests to route it to the
 .Nm
 interface.
 In this case, the packet will be accepted by the router,
-regardless of list of IPv6 interface addresses assigned to the router.
-The packet will be captured by an IPv6 TCP socket, if it has
+regardless of the list of IPv6 interface addresses assigned to the router.
+The packet will be captured by an IPv6 TCP socket, if it has the
 .Dv IN6P_FAITH
-flag turned on and it has matching address/port pairs.
-In result,
+flag turned on and matching address/port pairs.
+As a result,
 .Nm
 will let you capture IPv6 TCP traffic to some specific destination addresses.
 Userland programs, such as
@@ -79,43 +79,42 @@ and perform application-specific address
 .Pp
 The
 .Dv IN6P_FAITH
-flag on IPv6 TCP socket can be set by using
+flag on a IPv6 TCP socket can be set by using
 .Xr setsockopt 2 ,
-with level equals to
+with level
 .Dv IPPROTO_IPV6
-and optname equals to
+and optname
 .Dv IPv6_FAITH .
 .Pp
-To handle error reports by ICMPv6, some of ICMPv6 packets routed to
+To handle error reports by ICMPv6, some ICMPv6 packets routed to an
 .Nm
 interface will be delivered to IPv6 TCP, as well.
 .Pp
 To understand how
 .Nm
-can be used, take a look at source code of
+can be used, take a look at the source code of
 .Xr faithd 8 .
 .Pp
-As
+As the
 .Nm
-interface implements potentially dangerous operation,
-great care must be taken when configuring
-.Nm
-interface.
-To avoid possible misuse,
+interface implements potentially dangerous operations,
+great care must be taken when configuring it.
+To avoid possible misuse, the
 .Xr sysctl 8
 variable
 .Li net.inet6.ip6.keepfaith
 must be set to
 .Li 1
-prior to the use of the interface.
+prior to using the interface.
 When
 .Li net.inet6.ip6.keepfaith
 is
 .Li 0 ,
-no packet will be captured by
+no packets will be captured by the
 .Nm
 interface.
 .Pp
+The
 .Nm
 interface is intended to be used on routers, not on hosts.
 .\"
@@ -130,5 +129,5 @@ interface is intended to be used on rout
 .%O RFC3142
 .Re
 .Sh HISTORY
-The FAITH IPv6-to-IPv4 TCP relay translator was first appeared in
+The FAITH IPv6-to-IPv4 TCP relay translator first appeared in the
 WIDE hydrangea IPv6 stack.



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