Date: Sat, 30 Sep 1995 22:52:52 -0600 From: kelly@fsl.noaa.gov (Sean Kelly) To: jfieber@indiana.edu Cc: doc@freebsd.org Subject: Re: Printing handbook chapter COMPLETE Message-ID: <9510010452.AA25961@emu.fsl.noaa.gov> In-Reply-To: <Pine.BSF.3.91.950930232511.14315Q-100000@fieber-john.campusview.indiana.edu> (message from John Fieber on Sat, 30 Sep 1995 23:35:57 -0500 (EST))
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>>>>> "John" == John Fieber <jfieber@indiana.edu> writes:
John> This adds around 40 pages to the handbook and looks to be
John> much more complete than any standard unix admin books I have
John> around...
So that extra BS in technical writing is finally paying off.
John> The first sectioning tag should have been <chapt> instead of
John> <sect> I changed it and bumped the first <sect1>'s up to
John> <sect>'s.
Fair enough, and thanks for making the adjustments.
John> There was also one dead reference to BLAH, which I
John> assumed you had intended to be printing:kernel. Again, if
John> that was not right, we can change it.
Ooops, thanks for catching that. I thought I cleaned them all out.
Actually, that one (line 441) should've been a reference to the (not
yet existent?) kernel configuration chapter.
I just checked a realized there was one more BLAH that shouldn't have
made it through. Could you take it out (line 931)? I'd recommend
rewording like:
For more information on the ... see the file ... </tt>.
and just end the sentence there.
John> Okay, now go change that. Take her a honeymoon getaway
John> weekend somewhere.
Already got tickets to Hawaii for later this month!
John> (And don't sneak in any computer magazines.)
Awwwwww ... :-(
--
Sean Kelly
NOAA Forecast Systems Laboratory, Boulder Colorado USA
I went down the street to the 24-hour grocery. When I got there, the
guy was locking the front door. I said, "Hey, the sign says you're
open 24 hours." He said, "Yes, but not in a row." -- Steven Wright
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