Date: Sat, 21 Jan 2006 16:02:19 +0000 From: Ceri Davies <ceri@submonkey.net> To: Marc Fonvieille <blackend@FreeBSD.org> Cc: doc-committers@FreeBSD.org, cvs-doc@FreeBSD.org, cvs-all@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mirrors chapter.sgml Message-ID: <20060121160219.GI78801@submonkey.net> In-Reply-To: <20060121150330.GC675@gothic.blackend.org> References: <200601210935.k0L9ZdYd062806@repoman.freebsd.org> <20060121131114.GE78801@submonkey.net> <20060121150330.GC675@gothic.blackend.org>
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On Sat, Jan 21, 2006 at 04:03:30PM +0100, Marc Fonvieille wrote:
> On Sat, Jan 21, 2006 at 01:11:14PM +0000, Ceri Davies wrote:
> > On Sat, Jan 21, 2006 at 09:35:38AM +0000, Marc Fonvieille wrote:
> > > blackend 2006-01-21 09:35:38 UTC
> > >=20
> > > FreeBSD doc repository
> > >=20
> > > Modified files:
> > > en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mirrors chapter.sgml=20
> > > Log:
> > > Move down a note for a better rendering in a subsection layout. For
> > > simplification and better rendering, remove a mkdir command line
> > > example since the directory creation is already clearly mentioned in
> > > the text.
> >=20
> > Plus portsnap now does that bit itself. This is still useful
> > for anyone on RELENG_6_0 though.
> >
>=20
> The following diff should be more correct:
>=20
> Index: mirrors/chapter.sgml
> =3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=
=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=
=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D
> RCS file: /home/dcvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mirrors/chapter.s=
gml,v
> retrieving revision 1.404
> diff -u -r1.404 chapter.sgml
> --- mirrors/chapter.sgml 21 Jan 2006 09:35:38 -0000 1.404
> +++ mirrors/chapter.sgml 21 Jan 2006 14:59:08 -0000
> @@ -2430,8 +2430,11 @@
> <note>
> <para>In the default installation
> <filename role=3D"directory">/usr/ports</filename> is not
> - created. It should be created before
> - <command>portsnap</command> is used.</para>
> + created. If you run &os; 6.0-RELEASE, it should be created befo=
re
> + <command>portsnap</command> is used. On more recent
> + versions of &os; or <application>Portsnap</application>
> + port, this operation will be done automatically at first use
> + of the <command>portsnap</command> command.<para>
I'm actually quite happy with the text as it stands (especially as it
doesn't have the "if releng6... else..." problem). I don't really know
why I felt the need to mention the above...
Ceri
--=20
That must be wonderful! I don't understand it at all.
-- Moliere
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