Date: Mon, 22 May 2000 16:25:07 -0700 (PDT) From: Jim Mock <jim@FreeBSD.org> To: cvs-committers@FreeBSD.org, cvs-all@FreeBSD.org Subject: cvs commit: www/en applications.sgml Message-ID: <200005222325.QAA13396@freefall.freebsd.org>
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jim 2000/05/22 16:25:07 PDT
Modified files:
en applications.sgml
Log:
From the PR:
o Changed "the kernel plus source code..." to "the kernel and..."
o Made the three red sections parallel (sort of).
o Zapped a superfluous "to".
o Finally, fixed an effect/affect goof -- you'll find that the
previous verbiage mistakenly refers to Microsoft's marketing
strategy and not to FreeBSD's developers
PR: 18630
Submitted by: Daniel Harris <dannyboy@subdimension.com>
Revision Changes Path
1.17 +6 -6 www/en/applications.sgml
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