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Date:      Mon, 30 Jun 2003 00:55:43 -0700
From:      "Craig Reyenga" <craig@craig.afraid.org>
To:        <freebsd-doc@freebsd.org>
Subject:   Small handbook error in section 12.9.8.2
Message-ID:  <000701c33edd$022e7740$0200000a@fireball>

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Hi,

I caught a small error in section 12.9.8.2 "After the Disaster", paragraph
two:

"If the hardware has been damaged. First, replace those parts that have been
damaged."
The first sentence is a fragment, I suggest it should read:

"If any hardware has been damaged, replace those parts before attempting to
use the computer."

Or something to that effect. Just doing what I can :)

-Craig




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