Date: Thu, 12 Jul 2001 00:24:07 -0700 (PDT) From: "Peter J. Avalos" <pavalos@theshell.com> To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@freebsd.org Subject: docs/28906: [PATCH] Typos in en-handbook/serialcomms Message-ID: <200107120724.f6C7O7u67001@oxygen.theshell.com>
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>Number: 28906 >Category: docs >Synopsis: [PATCH] Typos in en-handbook/serialcomms >Confidential: no >Severity: non-critical >Priority: low >Responsible: freebsd-doc >State: open >Quarter: >Keywords: >Date-Required: >Class: doc-bug >Submitter-Id: current-users >Arrival-Date: Thu Jul 12 00:30:02 PDT 2001 >Closed-Date: >Last-Modified: >Originator: Peter J. Avalos >Release: FreeBSD 4.3-STABLE i386 >Organization: >Environment: System: FreeBSD oxygen.theshell.com 4.3-STABLE FreeBSD 4.3-STABLE #0: Tue Jul 10 11:41:59 PDT 2001 support@oxygen.theshell.com:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/OXYGEN i386 >Description: Spelling and grammar errors in serialcomms chapter of handbook >How-To-Repeat: Read the serialcomms chapter of handbook >Fix: Index: chapter.sgml =================================================================== RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/serialcomms/chapter.sgml,v retrieving revision 1.24 diff -u -r1.24 chapter.sgml --- chapter.sgml 2001/04/17 01:37:48 1.24 +++ chapter.sgml 2001/07/12 07:13:32 @@ -1190,7 +1190,7 @@ prompt. If the data rates do not match, <command>getty</command> sees anything the user types as <quote>junk</quote>, tries going to the next speed and gives the <prompt>login:</prompt> prompt again. This - procedure can continue ad nauseum, but normally only takes a keystroke + procedure can continue ad nauseam, but normally only takes a keystroke or two before the user sees a good prompt. Obviously, this login sequence does not look as clean as the former <quote>locked-speed</quote> method, but a user on a low-speed @@ -1992,12 +1992,12 @@ <sect2 id="serialconsole-intro"> <title>Introduction</title> - <para>The FreeBSD/i386 operating system can boot on a system with only + <para>The FreeBSD/i386 operating system can boot on a system with only a dumb terminal on a serial port as a console. Such a configuration - should be useful for two classes of people; system administrators who - wish to install FreeBSD on a dedicated file/compute/terminal server - machines that have no keyboard or monitor attached, and developers who - want to debug the kernel or device drivers.</para> + should be useful for two classes of people: system administrators who + wish to install FreeBSD on machines that have no keyboard or monitor + attached, and developers who want to debug the kernel or device + drivers.</para> <para>Starting from version 3.1, FreeBSD/i386 employs a three stage bootstrap. The first two stages are in the boot block code which is >Release-Note: >Audit-Trail: >Unformatted: To Unsubscribe: send mail to majordomo@FreeBSD.org with "unsubscribe freebsd-doc" in the body of the message
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