Date: Thu, 16 Dec 2004 23:51:03 +0100 From: "Simon L. Nielsen" <simon@FreeBSD.org> To: David Adam <zanchey@ucc.gu.uwa.edu.au> Cc: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Subject: Re: Rework of firewall chapter start Message-ID: <20041216225102.GB759@zaphod.nitro.dk> In-Reply-To: <Pine.LNX.4.58.0412161021380.12632@mussel.ucc.gu.uwa.edu.au> References: <20041215191024.GA759@zaphod.nitro.dk> <Pine.LNX.4.58.0412161021380.12632@mussel.ucc.gu.uwa.edu.au>
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--T4sUOijqQbZv57TR Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: inline Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable On 2004.12.16 10:27:55 +0800, David Adam wrote: > >- <para>All software-based firewalls provide some way to filter > >+ <para>Firewalls makes it possbile to filter >=20 > Should be "Firewalls make it possible to filter". Thanks! > I'm not really sure where the need to remove all references to firewalls > being software (for example, "OpenBSD PF firewall *software*") came from. In this case it was mainly a wording issue where I felt it "sounded" better not including the word "software"... --=20 Simon L. Nielsen --T4sUOijqQbZv57TR Content-Type: application/pgp-signature Content-Disposition: inline -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- Version: GnuPG v1.2.6 (FreeBSD) iD8DBQFBwhFWh9pcDSc1mlERAiLQAJ9vvxgXs8gTNJGERuA805cBRphGIwCgpE+E W35hULFTSQUIgt/XQyxRmbM= =+j6p -----END PGP SIGNATURE----- --T4sUOijqQbZv57TR--
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