Date: Sat, 3 Jul 2004 20:46:58 +0300 From: Ruslan Ermilov <ru@FreeBSD.org> To: Pawel Jakub Dawidek <pjd@FreeBSD.org> Cc: cvs-all@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: cvs commit: src/bin/chio chio.1 src/bin/cp cp.1 src/bin/date date.1 src/bin/df df.1 src/bin/domainname domainname.1 src/bin/echo echo.1 src/bin/hostname hostname.1 src/bin/ln ln.1 symlink.7 src/bin/ls ls.1 src/bin/pax pax.1 src/bin/rcp rcp.1 ... Message-ID: <20040703174658.GC63236@ip.net.ua> In-Reply-To: <20040703085033.GC12007@darkness.comp.waw.pl> References: <200407022104.i62L4Jp7043814@repoman.freebsd.org> <20040703085033.GC12007@darkness.comp.waw.pl>
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--vOmOzSkFvhd7u8Ms Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: inline Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable On Sat, Jul 03, 2004 at 10:50:33AM +0200, Pawel Jakub Dawidek wrote: > On Fri, Jul 02, 2004 at 09:04:19PM +0000, Ruslan Ermilov wrote: > +> -operations. This may be used if the operation takes unusually long > +> +operations. > +> +This may be used if the operation takes unusually long > +> because of buggy firmware or the like. > [...] > +> -Change volume tag for an element in the media changer. This command > +> -is only supported by few media changers. If it is not supported by a > +> +Change volume tag for an element in the media changer. > +> +This command > +> +is only supported by few media changers. > +> +If it is not supported by a > +> device, using this command will usually result in an "Invalid Field in > +> CDB" error message on the console. > [...] > +> -Print the primary volume tag for each loaded medium, if any. The vol= ume > +> +Print the primary volume tag for each loaded medium, if any. > +> +The volume > +> tag is printed as > [much more] >=20 > Are you planning to join those sentences somehow? > (i.e. "The volume\ntag is printed as" -> "The volume tag is printed as") > Or is this ok as it is now? >=20 No, I won't. Yes, it's okay as it's now. What was not okay is hardcoded sentence breaks. Sometimes, there were two spaces, but often only one, and sometimes more than two (not in this particular manpage). It's very very good rule of thumb to start each new sentence on its own line, so you never get to worry about them. ;) Cheers, --=20 Ruslan Ermilov ru@FreeBSD.org FreeBSD committer --vOmOzSkFvhd7u8Ms Content-Type: application/pgp-signature Content-Disposition: inline -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- Version: GnuPG v1.2.4 (FreeBSD) iD8DBQFA5vESqRfpzJluFF4RAr0xAJ9HoAIk7FGSp2Y2jqVCfJQqTOugVACfejJv b5r612yr3Xb5BzrTObDg2ZM= =b4w0 -----END PGP SIGNATURE----- --vOmOzSkFvhd7u8Ms--
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